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for Devils and Demons

by ArchNemesis

person MewMew2
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Exelent job. The story has all the elements of a professional novle and I have enjoyed what you have written so far. Please continue when you can.
person Birdie_Blythe
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay...comment on the teaser. Just let Sessh kill Kouga. There's never enough Kouga killing in fan fics. Besides....Someone has to die right?? Well, anywho, I loved this chapter and the one before. Update soon. Ja Ne!
person LadyIvy
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have fun! I wanna leave town for a couple of days and go drinking with you *sniffles* Oh well, since I can't be there in person, I'll be there in spirit, and if you could, drink a daiquiri, margarita and amaretto sour for me =). Anyway, about this chapter...I feel so sorry for Inuyasha. Is he suffering from some type of depression after the death of his children? I've never been pregnant so I wouldn't know about these things, but it seems as if he and Sesshomaru are due for a serious talk. Koga is an ass--always has been, always will be. He should not be taking advantage of Inuyasha because he wants him. He had his chance, and Sesshomaru made damn sure that he couldn't get him, so he should leave it alone. I do hope Sesshomaru kills him because frankly, it's time for a death and as Koga isn't my favorite character, I don't care if it's him. I do hope the twins are able to sort out their life in the modern era because they deserve some measure of happiness. Go teaser--can't wait to see the results.
person nette
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. kouga is just asking to get his butt handed to him isnt he. well i hope inu gets away from him in time before sessh arrives but from your teaser i can see that that may not happen so cant wait to read that tidbit. and with the twins i hope things work out for them and that trish doesnt do anything stupid to piss vergil off that might not be a good thing to do at the moment. ok enough of my ranting you know the drill update soon and keep up the writing, its great.
person nette
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was hot. i liked the fight scene its about time naraku got his ass handed to him. and the whole thing where vergil changed into his demon form that was unexpected. i cant wait to hear what will happen with inu/sessh and your cliffy with inu/kouga, definitely cant wait to read that. okay enough of my ranting. as always you know the drill so keep up the great writing.
person LadyIvy
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where to begin, where to begin...Ok, first off, I have to agree with Toga about Naraku. I cringed with him when confronted with the idea of Naraku and sex. *barfs* Please excuse me while I scour my eyes with bleach and a brillo pad. Also, was it wrong of me to laugh at the beatdown Naraku took? If so, I don't apologize for it because I laughed at him. I've always believed that Naraku is this weak little wimpy demon who has to resort to trickery and other machinations against his foes because if he were just to battle them outright, they'd hand him his ass on a platter. That's why he's so keen on sucking up other demons of power. Loser. Devil Vergil is hot, and the fight between him and his twin was interesting. I felt sorry for poor Dante having to fight against his mate, and I completely understand him taking his lover home. Yes, Vergil's attitude was justified--there is just something wrong with Naraku (nasty little bastard--don't like him, can you tell?). You've got me on the edge of my seat with that teaser...what the hell is Koga thinking? Man, I hope Sesshomaru beats the crap out of him for that stunt. Poor Inuyasha, Sesshomaru's going to be so mad...
person SP777
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember if I reviewed this sucker or not...I blame it on work.

Anyway, it is a very interesting story and the twins add a new flavor to the Inuyasha/Sesshomaru dynamics I see every now & then.

There IS one thing I have to mention, it's about Dante's swords...I don't
know why but EVERYTIME I see the names Ebony & Ivory, I think of that
freakin' song, 'Ebony & Ivory'.

..and yes, I'll spare us both by NOT typing the lyrics.


nuff said...
person Phantom
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story way to much to be healthy. Oh well. Crossovers always make things more interesting. I have to admit I love the DMC parts more that the Inu parts, but only because I am love DMC more. I can't wait for more and I demand more Vergil and Dante! Keep up the wonderful job.
person Birdie_Blythe
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are an Evil evil person....I can't believe you left it there.
Not to surprised you made Kagura his daughter, I prefer it to be that way.
I AM wondering who the other father is though. You said died so, I mean, it's not Sessho, but still. I'm wondering. And WTF is up with Virgil now???
I've been trying to get my hands on the DMC games but can't get them....I need background!! Update soon please!
person nette
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea another awesome chapter with a hint of violence. i luv it. oohhh a duel i cant wait to see that and that little tidbit about naraku i liked the way you twisted it around, surprised me a little. okay you know the drill update soon and keep up the excellent writing.