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for Devils and Demons

by ArchNemesis

person nette
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh great chapter. that was freaking hilarious having inu's walk in on them having a 'private moment'. i would have luved to see their faces when they saw that, especially miroku's. lol. anyway this was a nice chapter, showing another side to sesshy which i think is him in character though we don't see it like that in the anime. they had a girl too cute. i can see her being a daddy's girl and sesshy doing anything for her. and toga being grandpop will surely do anything for her. anyway cant wait to read more. and i hope the dante/vergil make up, i would hate to see dante hurt by his brother again. :) oh and hope you feel better.
person LadyIvy
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL. That flashback was hilarious. You would think that Kagome would learn not to barge into a room with closed doors, especially when someone tells her to wait, but oh well...The scene was great. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were having sex all over the dining room table (that I hope was replaced), while his friends were either too shocked or voyeuristic to remove themselves. I laughed at Miroku's reaction--of course he found the whole scene incredibly hot. I'm surprised he didn't pass out. I wonder if Toga experienced the same sexual boon with Sesshomaru's mother...

Yay! Sesshomaru admits his love for his mate. I'm glad Inuyasha was awake to hear it. He deserves it, and it's about time Sesshomaru told him. Mizuki sounds precious, and it's fitting that Sesshomaru has a daughter first, so he can learn how to dote upon his child.

I really hope Vergil and Dante figure out their issues next chapter.
person MewMew2
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing, but I've been really busy lately and my power went out about 3 weeks ago an came on last thursday. I t Sucked. ANyways, nice update and your story seems to be running smoothing at least that's my opinion. Thank you for updating, and I paitently await the next with egear anticipation; as strange as that may look in type considering the opposites used in the sentance. May you continue to be inspired, and may your plot not get lazy!
person nette
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story. sorry i didnt review last time but i am now. yeah you finally made inu/sessh parents. i can see it now, the inu household will never be the same again. and what about vergil/dante. i hope they can patch things up before its too late. oh so much drama and that trish, what is she up to. so i dont even have to say it you know the routine and keep up the great writing. :)
person LadyIvy
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that Vergil's a right bastard, isn't he? He couldn't even listen to his mate before he flew off the handle. Poor Dante--he deserves better. He at least should have a mate who will listen to what he has to say before punching him, especially after he told him he was pregnant. Ass.

At least Sesshomaru got his act together. He finally has the heir he needs so that no one can contest his mating, and his brother has been able to fill somewhat the hole that was left when the first set of pups died. Toga's in awe, as are most grandparents when they meet their first grandchild. Teary-eyed Sesshomaru sounds precious, if I do say so myself. I can't wait to see more on this family bonding. The teaser looks great.
person LadyIvy
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha--you'd think he'd remember the signs of his first pregnancy. Oh well...I hope that he is happy to be pregnant and that this pregnancy does not have the problems of the first one. I don't know who I think is nastier--Naraku or Muso. Naraku for obvious reasons, but Muso was a surprise. Did he really think Toga was that dumb? I know the demon lord likes to joke around and stuff, but come on, he's not an idiot and he would have to be one to get with Muso *shivers in disgust*

I feel really bad for Dante. Things just can't be easy for him, it seems. Here he is, newly reconciled with his brother and pregnant as well. Trish won't give him a divorce, and Vergil is suspicious. *sigh* He can't catch a break, can he? The teaser looks good (I think you've hooked me into the story more with the teasers--they always give me ideas and anything that lets my imagination run wild is a good thing...)
person SP777
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Is it just me or was that a....FILLER episode! *big smile* *BIG smile* ;-]

person SP777
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I was so long responding, but working overnight at the job has turned me into...the walking dead. Fear me ya'll.

1. I'll be checking out that site soon...this week in other words.

2. PLEASE don't turn it into a tail!!!!

I don't know WHY some authors out there want to turn Sesshomaru's fur pelt into a tail of ALL things! I mean Good Lord..
doesn't ANYONE watch the series closely. Can't they see it isn't
attached to his butt?!?! Plus a few authors, I have seen, who aren't familiar with the series actually go by that, IF they don't do their
homework.

I've read good stories that ruin it for me when they have Sesshomaru..and EVEN Inuyasha with..a..tail.

*sigh* I just don't understand it.

I'm sorry..I just gotta protest.

3. Oh yeah...that word Cuirass, I was SO tempted to say 'Cure-ass'. But I know better. :-)

4. I want to thank you for that LOVELY line 'where a gooey path was flowing.' in chapter 20, of all the yaoi I've read and I've read
plenty [..and I thought hell would freeze over before I would..] I have never seen such a 'description'.

I was torn between laughing & being quite baffled. O_o

..and it's going to stay with me all day.

5. About Dante being a 'bearer of life', if folks don't get THAT by now in a Inuyasha/Sesshomaru section, then all hope is lost.
person LadyIvy
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Vergil was so mean to Trish, but it was funny. I loved his smug expressions. It's too bad that Trish didn't listen to his earlier warning--Dante is clearly his. She's hurt, I can understand, but I hope she won't push the idea of Dante being under a spell of some sort because I can't see that turning out well. Wonder what will happen when Dante awakens? Wonder if he'll be randy in the middle of the night and have sex with his brother not knowning Trish is in the other bed? That would be awesome! Anyway, loved the chapter and can't wait for the new one. That teaser has me worried--my poor Inu *sniffles*
person nette
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
darn you nemesis. i hate it when you do that but then i dont cuz it keeps be coming back to read more. darn i wanted to know more but that whole bearer of life, i like that. so it seems dante is like inu and can only bear children not really conceive them. ok. but again with the teaser, i wonder what happened to inu, did he get sick or is he pregnant or something. oh the suspense is killing me, please hurry and update. :)