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Both chapters, and i can't consider them to even be ONE chapter, at all!! Anyway, both
chapters are too short and nothing much happened..Kinda boring, to say the least..

Still say the pup should've been a boy, or at least, a pair of twin sons, or an OLDER boy
and a younger girl or something like that...

Poor Dante -- I feel so sorry for him. Stupid Trish. I hope she's the bitch to whom Toga's referring. I hope she goes down soon because I can't stand her. Vergil's an ass, and I really, really, really hope that Dante doesn't awaken to the scene of his brother screwing his wife. Talk about messed up.

Can't wait for the rest of the Inu family to arrive. It's going to be hell, literally. Sesshomaru bows to no one, and as Inuyasha can provide him with heirs, he doesn't need a female mate. Let's just hope he's diplomatic about it (yeah right!).

nnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooo. i cant believe that wench did that. that....that...was just wrong. and poor dante, just gave birth, lying unconscious and his brother and ex wife are getting it on. what else could go wrong for the devil twins. and i wonder what toga will do when his family arrives and when he finds out what trish did. cant wait to read more so update soon. k. ; )

*arms crossed....head turned to the side*

I'm not saying not one word about how #27 ended! Not. One. Word!

Great story..It's sad too hear that, Inu/Sess only has a daughter..I rather wished their first would or should
have been a boy..I hope too see more pups, preferably males..

Great story..I really enjoyed this one and hope you update soon..

Sorry I didn't review for the previous chapter--you updated too fast =). Anyway, that Vergil is really on my hit list as I like him less and less as the chapters progress. Stupid bastard thinking that the children aren't his, putting his pregnant mate through all that stress. Anyway, poor Dante. I hope the baby is ok, and if it is not, that Sesshomaru can revive it with Tenseiga. It shouldn't have to suffer for it's fathers' stupidity (and I say both fathers because although Vergil left him, Dante should have had enough sense to take better care of himself in deference to the life inside him).

Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are too funny. Inuyasha's lack of shame at feeding his child is refreshing. He shouldn't have any. hehe. If everyone else is at the dinner table eating, why can't Mizuki eat? Granted, she's breastfeeding, but who really cares (other than Miroku)? Their horniness is hilarious, btw. With the way they're going at it, I wouldn't be surprised if Inuyasha ended up pregnant very soon. At the rate they're going, it seems that we shall have an army of little dog demons.

That teaser was messed up. What the hell is Trish up to now? What did she give Vergil that would make him want her? Does anyone stop her in time? *sigh* I'll be waiting on pins and needles for this next update...

about # 25...

*laughing* You know what, you got Sesshomaru's move down to the letter T WITH every 'i' dotted. :-)

Don't you just envy the way he can do a move like that AND still
be considered masculine?

Oh, and I LOVED how you had him explain about the true mating
of Demons & Devils, I felt like Trish...hit upside the head with a
sledgehammer!

*sigh* I wish I could do that...well in a way I can, but not in such a
refined, elegant, intelligent & poised way.

Hey! I guess that compliment pertains to you since YOU came up
with it. :-)
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about #26...

Yeah we are definitely in Angst Central now, if it isn't Inuyasha, it's Dante.

Hopefully Sesshomaru comes through, if it's not too late.

By the way, where IS Dante's older child? I know you said she was given to neighbors but where is she now?

Side note: I noticed you've become a regular updating machine, but you better pace yourself, nothing worse than experiencing a sudden burnout.

is trish going to do what i think she's going to do. please tell me she will not use sesshy. omg this story is getting better every time i read it. and yes the teasers add to the excitement (though they're still cruel). and nnnnnnnnnooooooo dante can't lose the baby. nothing seems to be working out for the brothers. (sobs) please have something good come out of the next chapter, or at least having the brothers show a little ways of making up. :)

Well since I missed out on reviewing #23, I'll settle for #24...

There's something endearing about seeing ''Sesshomaru's Little Princess'' it makes you want to say, 'Awww...' :-)

But I think Kagome DESERVED that damn shock, the impulsive lil'...*grr*
It would have been sweet justice If Toga {Inutaisho] caught ALL of them & embarassed their butts into next week.

Oh, I gotta mention... Inuyasha isn't going to have breasts for long, right? O_O

that teaser was cruel. i wonder what happened i hoped he didn't hurt himself or the unborn baby. and having sesshy lay the ground down for trish was priceless. he was the right person to tell her off even if dante thought it was kind of harsh, she needed to know that dante was no longer hers but vergils. and what did vergil mean he was unable to produce offspring, did something happen to him to become sterile? anyway cant wait to read more and hopefully things will work out for the brothers. *crosses fingers* i hope. :)