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that was so not good, Inuyasha coming back and all. I liked what Kagome said at the end, and how she didn't mention the condition Sesshoumaru was in--a wise decision. I liked this chapter, so, please update again soon!

There is something about Shippo's reaction to Sesshomaru that I find completely and utterly adorable. Only a child would accept something so wholeheartedly, without questioning the motives behind it. He's so cuddleable!

Another brilliant chapter. I do enjoy the fact that Kagome treats everyone basically the same. She isn't giving Sesshomaru special treatment b.c of who he is and b.c of that we get to see how Sess acts to who Kagome is just as we see how the others act with her. It makes an awesome contrast between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru b.c we know that the hanyou would have already said something stupid and have been sat.

I think the little teasing remarks, however subtle, between Sesshomaru and Kagome are an interesting touch. It gives him emotions that we usually don't see and softens his appearance in the sense of making him more of a person, instead of just an enigma (but then again, maybe that is what Sess usually goes for).

I'm excited about seeing this from Sesshomaru's perspective, but I'm also very interested in finding out where exactly Inuyasha was.

Oh, and when you want italics just do this (w.o spaces): < i > word < / i > for every word, phrase, and etc, that you want italicised. The same goes w. bold, just substitute the i for b . Hope that helps some. Great chapter, keep up the awesome work!

(btw) The Anon above is me (I'm sure you can't tell from the excessively long reviews). I forgot to check to see if I was still logged in after going idol for too long. ^__^' I'm a bit of a retard.

This is so funny :o) Love the alternate viewpoint chapters. Keep up the good work!

This is a cute tantalizing fic and you do have the characters down fairly well. Your depiction of Kagome's thoughts and words are quite comical. I like the build and pace.

As for italics, if you are loading by copy and paste, without spaces, type in < i >before the words that you wish to italisize, and < / i > after. Be sure to put the slash in the end code. You might be able to find more coding in the resources section.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Snowfall

I think Sesshoumaru is acting just fine. And he is really funny, I probably like that the most. Especially when he tries to remember the last time he saw a woman's naval. Has he ever seen one? That never got answered.

Witty banter and a wonderful plot line, what more could you ask for in a story?

I think this is one of the most unique representations of Sesshomaru I have read and I honestly think it fits him quite nicely. It's a view beyond of what the normal series provides and it's far from the normally stoic, "I hate humans" view that most fandom stories take on (and then let the story twist, w. lots of inner, unbelievable monologue: "how can this Sesshomaru be falling for a mere human" or "this Sesshomaru can't be thinking these thoughts over Inuyasha's wench" and other cliche things that usually make me want to puke, or at least stop reading before I do so).

I like the idea that Sesshomaru isn't infallible, b.c honestly, who doesn't make mistakes? I mean, if his father was defeated and he was supposed to be "the shit" of you inu clan, then the possibility of Sesshomaru being absolutely perfect (except maybe in appearance) is a bit far fetched. Plus I find the ghostly threats from Inutaisho amusing.

Brilliant job w. the speech and tone in this story. The way you set up both your inner and spoken dialogue, for both characters, really takes on voices unique to the person speaking/thinking. It's difficult to do that, but you've done an excellent job with this.

Also, kudos on the smart assery that just exudes from both characters, especially Kagome. I love it! Maybe b.c it's the type of writing style/dialogue I love to read, or maybe b.c it's the way my friends and I talk, but the way you've written it just jumps out to me and makes me want to read the story over and over again. Which I probably will. It's a very unique writing style. It's a bit more...intelligent (for lack of a better word) than most, and your word choice (which can be just phenomenal), makes it all the more appealing. It's hard to pull off a story written like this, so all the more kudos to you (and possibly some cookies as well).

I'm very excited to see what else you put into this story. It has such promise of amusement and good times ahead, I can't wait!

You sure do have a way with words. The wit and humor is great. Can't wait for the next bout of humor.

Snow

Wohoo. :D Great this far! I hope to see more of this soon. ^___^

-giggle- It's funny-ish all right. :) Good job! ^_^

Very good, I can't wait for you to write more. Despite Sesshoumaru being OC, it definately has potential. Write again soon please.