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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter and can't wait to read what happens next. Poor Sesshomaru though, lol. With the whole Rin concept, it had me laughin'.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! You updated! That was a very interesting chapter. Rin was just sooo cute. And OMG, what the hell is that agreement that InuTaisho made with the Eastern Lord. Maybe Sesshoumaru should just kill the old bastard. Oh gosh! Sesshoumaru's reaction to Rin's question was absolutely hilarious. I'm still grinning. Glad Keichi is still alive and suffering. Heheh. Can't wait to see Kagome's reaction to seeing the clay pot and the idiot. Sesshoumaru's reaction was amusing. Hm, am I missing anything? Probably. That was a really full chapter and well done. Thanks bunches for sticking around and continuing the fic. I lurve you!
Geeze, you didn't have to give me all that credit. *blush* I'm just a piniata full of plot bunnies. Eh, glad to make you so happy. ^_^ Let me know if you need any help. I'd be happy to oblige. ^_^
Great chappie and I anxiously await the next!
Snow
Geeze, you didn't have to give me all that credit. *blush* I'm just a piniata full of plot bunnies. Eh, glad to make you so happy. ^_^ Let me know if you need any help. I'd be happy to oblige. ^_^
Great chappie and I anxiously await the next!
Snow
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Erm, I can't figure out this sentence:
"As she stormed off, Sesshomaru followed quietly, glaring murderously at the odd youkai appearing at her bright pink holy aura and obvious power."
There was another one that needed restructuring, but that was the only one that I couldn't wrap around my mind. ^_^ Maybe it's just late, or the med dosage increase. LOL
Snow
"As she stormed off, Sesshomaru followed quietly, glaring murderously at the odd youkai appearing at her bright pink holy aura and obvious power."
There was another one that needed restructuring, but that was the only one that I couldn't wrap around my mind. ^_^ Maybe it's just late, or the med dosage increase. LOL
Snow
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Sesshy's reaction to Rin's crush was priceless and perfect. I love the story so far, update soon if you can! ^_^
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE YOU UPDATE SOON PLEASE HAVE KAGOMAE KICK INU'S ASS ALL OVER JAPAN KIKOU HATERS RULE
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting chapter. It's about time Mama got some lovin' too. I loved Kagome's reaction, first shock and then complete acceptance. It was so cute when her mom told her that she was perfect. And, I think that it is appropriate that Kagome is completely confused.
I can totally see Sesshoumaru avoiding Kagome for two whole days. It was really funny when he thought she was using her miko wiles on him. I'm going back and re-reading the fic because it didn't feel to me as though Sesshoumaru was at the kissing stage yet, unless you want it to be a complete shock to him too. I can't wait for his perspective on the two days that he avoided her.
Funny and well written as always,
Snow
I can totally see Sesshoumaru avoiding Kagome for two whole days. It was really funny when he thought she was using her miko wiles on him. I'm going back and re-reading the fic because it didn't feel to me as though Sesshoumaru was at the kissing stage yet, unless you want it to be a complete shock to him too. I can't wait for his perspective on the two days that he avoided her.
Funny and well written as always,
Snow
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI! I'm a new reader and I absolutely fell head-over-heels in love with your story! You are a very talented writer and your idea is very original! I saw that you were nominated for best comedy in the IYFG! I will definately be voting for you. Can't wait to see your next chapter!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, just not her day is it? >.< Poor Kagome, lol. Welp, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes, we must have sesshoumaru's thoughts as soon as possible! I find them sooo interesting =)
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, So I'm thinking I didn't show you enough love because you still haven't updated. So how much more love do you want? It's pure torture what you have us going trough! What happens after the kiss?? I'm dying... but it's OK. I just want you to know how much I LOVE this story. Take your time.....I'm done ranting.