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November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
brilliant. absolutely brilliant. cue helpless laughter. ^^
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very fun story so far. Though it doesn't seem to fit with the Inu no Taisho having fathered Inuyasha having his spirit torture Sesshomaru has been entertaining.
I absolutely loved Sesshomaru's last line in this chapter.
Thanks for writing!
I absolutely loved Sesshomaru's last line in this chapter.
Thanks for writing!
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the new chapters; I absolutely love this story! Good luck with your Sociology too. ^.^ If I come up with any suggestions, I'll be sure to post up another review.
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is my fav chapter of the entire story. Kagome pissed is hilarious.
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Can't wait to see the next chapter. Please update as soon as possible!
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waw !!!!!!!! Your humor is absolutely delightful. Nothing else to say : I love this story. Thank you very much !!! (Questions : how old are Rin and her "boyfriend" ? Will Sesshomaru think about how Rin's feeling in her gut and heart and how himself was feeling with Kagome before kissing her ?)
A french mother and reader,
Merci beaucoup,
Merely Truth
A french mother and reader,
Merci beaucoup,
Merely Truth
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I must say that I truely enjoy this story. I absolutely adore how you are able to have two perspectives on the same situation. It makes the story more complete and real. Someone once said that the best stories draw you in and have the stories unfold around the reader. One way to do this is to describe one things at least three differnent ways...but that is hard to do and a bit tedious. You have managed to do the same thing by using a technique that I haven't seen often done. You play out the situation twice with different perspectives inhancing the reader's experience. I admire your determination to do such a thing. I would most likely been unable to do such a thing. (too troublesome for me...yes I am lazy). This story is well thought out and well written. I await your next installment.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I re-read that last chapter and looked at my review. It didn’t do it justice. Erm, my brain has been on the fritz for awhile now. Hehe.
I just had to tell you that I found these things very funny:
[ “See you guys tomorrow. And, Inuyasha…Why don’t you just SIT there and be comfortable? I mean, by SITTING there you can relax, maybe even take a nap. And, a nice SIT would do you wonders, don’t you think so? Because SITTING, I mean, a good SIT, would do you a world of good. So SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT and be merry, okay?” she asked, smiling perkily at the groaning, prone Inuyasha, turning around with a flick of her hair and flouncing away into the dark night.
But what, exactly, did he suck?
Because pink turned Jaken an even more unappealing shade of sickly green, reminiscent of the entrails of a rancid pile of fish.
Or Keichi...
as his blasted father could not have possibly ascended at death.
‘This is entirely your fault, you feckless…’
The gleeful cackle that suddenly resonated through his brain had him gritting his teeth.
“Um…Rin…Rin…Lord Sesshomaru? How do you know when you love someone?” she mumbled.
Sesshomaru stood stock-still, eyes wide in total, inescapable terror.
Sesshomaru dimly considered slicing off his own ears, scratching out his own eyes and hiding somewhere where he would not have to hear this…he had always considered the moon a beautiful place.
“I am fine. I will need some time to answer, Rin. Don’t concern yourself overmuch.” He said coolly, full-blown panic causing him to stall spectacularly.]
I love how Rin goes from telling Sesshoumaru all about what had happened with her and then abruptly changes the topic to Sesshoumaru’s welfare. That was very amusing.
Ah, ‘prevaricated’. Always have loved that word
This gave me a contented smile:
[esshomaru watched her go, bemused, then cast one last glance at his half-sibling, before following dutifully, resolved to protect any hapless being stupid, or unlucky, enough to get into Kagome’s way.
She was obviously on the warpath.
For some reason, that brought a delighted smile to Sesshomaru’s lips.]
Re-reading this gave me some ideas that I'll send your way. ^_^
Snow
I just had to tell you that I found these things very funny:
[ “See you guys tomorrow. And, Inuyasha…Why don’t you just SIT there and be comfortable? I mean, by SITTING there you can relax, maybe even take a nap. And, a nice SIT would do you wonders, don’t you think so? Because SITTING, I mean, a good SIT, would do you a world of good. So SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT SIT and be merry, okay?” she asked, smiling perkily at the groaning, prone Inuyasha, turning around with a flick of her hair and flouncing away into the dark night.
But what, exactly, did he suck?
Because pink turned Jaken an even more unappealing shade of sickly green, reminiscent of the entrails of a rancid pile of fish.
Or Keichi...
as his blasted father could not have possibly ascended at death.
‘This is entirely your fault, you feckless…’
The gleeful cackle that suddenly resonated through his brain had him gritting his teeth.
“Um…Rin…Rin…Lord Sesshomaru? How do you know when you love someone?” she mumbled.
Sesshomaru stood stock-still, eyes wide in total, inescapable terror.
Sesshomaru dimly considered slicing off his own ears, scratching out his own eyes and hiding somewhere where he would not have to hear this…he had always considered the moon a beautiful place.
“I am fine. I will need some time to answer, Rin. Don’t concern yourself overmuch.” He said coolly, full-blown panic causing him to stall spectacularly.]
I love how Rin goes from telling Sesshoumaru all about what had happened with her and then abruptly changes the topic to Sesshoumaru’s welfare. That was very amusing.
Ah, ‘prevaricated’. Always have loved that word
This gave me a contented smile:
[esshomaru watched her go, bemused, then cast one last glance at his half-sibling, before following dutifully, resolved to protect any hapless being stupid, or unlucky, enough to get into Kagome’s way.
She was obviously on the warpath.
For some reason, that brought a delighted smile to Sesshomaru’s lips.]
Re-reading this gave me some ideas that I'll send your way. ^_^
Snow
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* I wanted so much to see more of this fic, it's driving me insane with not knowing what happens with Inuyasha whenever Kagome gets to do well... whatever it is that she's going to do! And Sesshomaru-sama is FINALLY getting to know his feelings for the miko... it makes me so happy... domo arigato for writting this and I can't wait to see it being updated!!^^