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person Sieg
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still a very good story. I like how you made sango out to be the bad person and not miroku this time. Only thing that will never make sense is why Sesshomaru did not kill the priest, for attacking Rin. I understand that it would be in front of her but has that stopped him before it just seemed out of place. Well keep up your great work.

~~Sieg
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my go, and those two actually thought giving Kagome the shot was a good ide. Those two are going at it like rabbits. They`ve had more sex than many people have in months in just a few days. I hope the kill Naraku soon, so that Sango doesn`t have to be jealous of kagome anymore and so that she can get pupped as Inuyasha woul saay, Kagome too, on the other hand now that ther`s no chance of getting her pregnant she should get laid . All this bitchiness made her very OOC. Well that was the only criticism I could find , I immensely enjoyed your story and thus on to the next part
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to read the third instalment. I hope you keep writing wonderful fics and stories for us to read.
person Sieg
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just as the frist one this story has been great.
person chefyoukai
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dont stop now it was just getting good plus this story rocks
person KJ
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yet another great chapter
keep up the work, I love each and every chapter
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey... I thought I would leave you your first review for this fic, even though you already know how much I am enjoying it I figured it couldn't hurt to say it again. I am so glad aff is back up and running. It looks like they have finished transfering the IY archive at last.

Ah well, keep up the good work.