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wow i loved it please hurry and update soon . great fic

Oh, I hate you. I need more NOW.

I forgot to breathe at the end and I started to cough when I finally realized this. Please finish this don't allow this to be one of those stories I stare at everyday and yet they are never updated. Please, I'm begging you.

Ahhhhhh!!!! You're such a tease! XP I want more! Hurry and finish this! Please? ^_^

*Clears throat* MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *moans* more, please more!

Nooo stop with the teasing and have him F*ck her!

Yes I want more!!!!!!!!! .....How could you end it like that especially at the really juicy lemony part... oh man I wish I were Rin at that very moment. Please update love the way her explains what he's going to do when he catches her..... please don't leave us in suspense.

PLEASEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE I'M CRYING HERE!!!!!!!!! NEVER SEEN A STORY SO INTENSE AND SESSHOMARU IS SOMETHNG ELSE.. ITS LIKE YOU ARE IN HIS MIND OR READING HIS MIND DAMN THIS IS AMAZING... WE DEMAND CHAPTER 2. CRAZED FANS WILL BUG YOU UNTIL YOU UPDATE!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO US LIKE THIS.... I THOUHGT YOU LOVED US (@____@) ("crying and has left the room")!!!!!!

i like this alot, especially sesshomaru's detailing action to Rin.

Holy crap!!! That was totally freaken awesome!!

But...errr....how old is Rin? Man, that was freaken sweet. Awesome chapter!! Bravo!! I'm excited about the next one!!

I hope Sesshomaru doesn't hurt her, and she likes what he's going to do. Gosh, that some intense hotness you left me on. I bow to you, *bowing motion*. I can't believe you left it like that!! Totally suspenseful!! I can't take suspense!

Please update!! Please, please, please, please.

I demand updating. I will harass you until you show results.

Awesome story. This is something totally fresh and new. You have great writing skills. I'm totally in envy. I love every word I read. I hope you update in this week!!! I'm waiting, eagerly to see the awesomeness that is this story!!!