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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The ancient one is perhaps more "characters like", but I prefer the other one, more romantic...Sesshomaru with guilt !°!°! In all cases, thank you very much, I love how you wrote these stories, and I would like to read a sequel : when she awakes, how he would take care of her because she is certainly sore, and how it would be going when they return at the castle and she is known to bee the Lady of the West, mate of Sesshoumaru ! I'm very hungry for that !!!!
A french reader,
merci beaucoup !
Merely Truth
A french reader,
merci beaucoup !
Merely Truth
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think anything was wrong was your first version.....and, I still love it....if anyone was bad mouthing your story...Please let me know...I have a couple of friends who would be more than happy to have a talk to them....keep it up!!!!!!!!!!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy mackerel!!! Hands down the second version is my choice! Not only it is wonderfully LUSTIER than the 1st version (which is FABULOUS as well!)...*fanning my flushed cheeks here* but the EMOTIONS, my god, the EMOTIONS are so much richer, so layered and textured and as exactly as I would envision Sesshomaru to behave. (Poor puppy! He's paradoxically torn between his lofty stature as "top dog" and yet that image is ironically and so easily humbled by a mere slip of a human girl...FANTASTIC wordsmithing !!)
I can only bow to your greatness and patiently wait if ever the "wake-up love" session and the "waterplay" come to fruition! Fine writing, like fine wine, is worth the wait.
You ought to submit this to Tomoe-chan's website Moonlight Flower - it's completely devote to S/R fanatics. A contest is going on and I know this will WOW them !!!
One last thought and I DO mean to nag you - what about "RED STRINGS" !!???!!! I want you to continue this fic, PLEASE!!!!
I can only bow to your greatness and patiently wait if ever the "wake-up love" session and the "waterplay" come to fruition! Fine writing, like fine wine, is worth the wait.
You ought to submit this to Tomoe-chan's website Moonlight Flower - it's completely devote to S/R fanatics. A contest is going on and I know this will WOW them !!!
One last thought and I DO mean to nag you - what about "RED STRINGS" !!???!!! I want you to continue this fic, PLEASE!!!!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm *happy smile* loved it!!! sequel?
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! That was Beautiful, I have aways love Sesshoumaru and Rin as a pairing.
Sesshoumaru Sin as lovers, I have alway thought they great to together, the fanfic is just so beautfiul it shows, the lust love and desirer that they have for one another , it is a beautiful thnig, well done!!!!!!
Sesshoumaru Sin as lovers, I have alway thought they great to together, the fanfic is just so beautfiul it shows, the lust love and desirer that they have for one another , it is a beautiful thnig, well done!!!!!!
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weee! You finished!! Thank you!!
I loved it. Thank you for writing such good S/R smut. The world is in such short supply of it, so again, THANK YOU!
I loved it. Thank you for writing such good S/R smut. The world is in such short supply of it, so again, THANK YOU!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really, i thought you would never finished this story!!! but alas, you did. i love it!!! such a well written story with so much intense emotions. this story is the best!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So hot...
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Freaking AMAZING!!!!
Dark and edgy with razor sharp sensuality. Gah! Gave me shivers of sinful delight.
Wonderful!
Dark and edgy with razor sharp sensuality. Gah! Gave me shivers of sinful delight.
Wonderful!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh...that was so hot! Yummy SessxRin goodness! XP