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February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY!
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your lemons are great. they can get anyone all hot and wanting them selfs. looking forward to the morning after.
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the vs 1 was better!
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually created a LiveJournal just so I could continually tell you how much your writing ROCKS!!!!! Some people have no business putting a pen to paper and creating stories but you could do it for a living! Complete and utter props your way! I know you only seem to do Sess/Rin stories but if you ever got bored out of your mind do ya think you could try a Sess/Kikyo story? I always wanted to see one and I can't seem to find one anywhere and if anyone could actually write one worth reading it would be you!!!!! Signed, Your new stalker lol
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the re-write! The first version was very well written, but the second is my choice. It has a darker passion that is fascinating and very arousing. Very good.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I am really impressed with your writting, specially vocabulary. It's just... wow... how I wish I could write like you someday. Great story.
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting take on their story. it's more original than most of their "interactions". very long, but a good story nonetheless.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AMAZING! I think you really got sesshomaru's character down to a T, the ending was my fav part i'm so glad you had him say he loves her! yay :)
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You weren't kidding when you said you rewrote this, wow.
I like both versions, but for different reasons. I did like the first because it was unyielding in its brutality and didn't go off that course. It stayed true through the beginning to end. And I liked that. Most if not all fics that start out in a similar manner start out non-conish and then up in full consent and alot into WAFF >< I can't stand that and I was glad to have finally found someone who kept it non-con but didn't go into full blown rape or go do a 180 into WAFF land. It is so rare to find well written dark rough sex, and in Sess/Rin fandom... nearly impossible.
I enjoyed this version though, the lemon aspect of it was definitely more detailed and intense than in the previous version. Was it more IC though? My inkling is yes, although I do hold a deep love for a rough brutal Sesshomaru that doesn't back down. But even so, I am more likely to believe he would stop as soon as he realized he was in fact hurting her to the degree he was. So I think all in all, this version is more IC for Sesshomaru's character.
I've blathered long enough. I thoroughly enjoy your writing in all 3 stories you have posted here and it made my year as soon as I read that you are considering continuing this into more lemony goodness, not to mention working on your others. You are officially my favorite Sess/Rin writer and I will shamelessly fangirl you.
I like both versions, but for different reasons. I did like the first because it was unyielding in its brutality and didn't go off that course. It stayed true through the beginning to end. And I liked that. Most if not all fics that start out in a similar manner start out non-conish and then up in full consent and alot into WAFF >< I can't stand that and I was glad to have finally found someone who kept it non-con but didn't go into full blown rape or go do a 180 into WAFF land. It is so rare to find well written dark rough sex, and in Sess/Rin fandom... nearly impossible.
I enjoyed this version though, the lemon aspect of it was definitely more detailed and intense than in the previous version. Was it more IC though? My inkling is yes, although I do hold a deep love for a rough brutal Sesshomaru that doesn't back down. But even so, I am more likely to believe he would stop as soon as he realized he was in fact hurting her to the degree he was. So I think all in all, this version is more IC for Sesshomaru's character.
I've blathered long enough. I thoroughly enjoy your writing in all 3 stories you have posted here and it made my year as soon as I read that you are considering continuing this into more lemony goodness, not to mention working on your others. You are officially my favorite Sess/Rin writer and I will shamelessly fangirl you.