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for Discovery of You

by Lovergal

person Morgan
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing. Your story is gripping and powerful...beautifully written. It has captured my heart. Keep up the great work! Update soon, please!
person Chigirl
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well Sango should be like fuck you then!!! Kagome would have to beg me, again before I took her back. God I sound to into this. Thats what I like about this site. There's no judgement, so love can be free. As it is mean to be. And this is coming from a hetero southern baptist. Your story is beautiful and hideous! Wonderful and tragic in a way that makes you feel. Please continue, I'm really enjoying reading my first Yuri fic.

Chigirl
person MonCappy
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this stroy thus far. I think it is well written. I hope it has a happy ending with Sango and Kagome ending up together.
person Anthony
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a chapter man fic keeps getting better and better can't for next chapter to see whats going to happen. get up soon cause I'm bustin a gut to see if Sango and Kagome love will be torn apart or not.
person Anthony
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a sweet chapter can't wait for the last two. this a great fic every chapter was great and the last two are going to be wonderful I feel it.
person LathainZeal
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Masterfully done! I definetly look forward to reading more.
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finnished chapter 3. It's a very good story so far. (short review-back to reading).
person jeshika
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more then 120 hits and no reviews?... i think i HAVE to comment.. great story, wish there were more chapters or even stories seperate, there arn't many yuri/shojou-ai that have a heart, ur story does.. its not just lust its feeling. something nice to read.. thanx for writing!! maybe u can get inspired to write some more?!.. wishful thinking.. lol