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by ForGetMeNot

person English Teacher
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you twelve? That would explain why you can't spell and why your grammar is so horrible. Maybe English is not your first language. Either way, your writing skills and your story telling skills are the worst I've ever seen.
schedule April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was so cute! Damn the guy that tried to violate Kagome! Anywhoos, I really enjoyed your story and its squishy fluffyness. If things can be squishy and fluffy at the same time.. But yeah, great job!
- rin.dee