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by ForGetMeNot

schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww it was sweet!! I really Liked it. =^.=.^=
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Pucie
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! That was great, it was such a sweet story! It was kinda short tho. . .Maybe work on your powers of description in the your next story. . .Other than that. . .Awesome!!
person Crystal*Brite
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!Action & Romance too!it was great but,I wish kagome wasn't always the damsel in distress.
person Sayvorie
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww :D
I'm usually a lemon whore, but this was sweet enough not to need one
*loves up on the fic*
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this... the OOC is cute... and it works... but you might want to spell check ur grammar and such in this
there are a lot of noncritical errors and you spell some of the character's names wrong.

Just thought you should know.

^_^ still loved it.
person chubbers
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
soooo sweeeet!
person Fred
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Suggestion - Get a dictionary and a book on English grammar and sentence structure. Prissiest is actually Priestess, and the well is not capable of clasping anything as it does not have any hands or arms. It can collapse, but not clasp.
person Cystal
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww so cute hope ya make more!


~Chris~
person InuNaiomi- ff.net
schedule May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that is so fucking cute you so could have went two ways with that one, either fluffy or hott sex, that was good.