rate_review Reviews

That was interesting, disterbingly intence for something so short, but well written. Good job.

It was a nice little ficlet. If you wanted to make it more than a oneshot that would be nice.

I really liked the story....keep up the good work and write ASAP

You know, I really don't like evil Sesshoumaru or weak, angsty Inuyasha... I didn't hate this, though. I kinda even felt for him a little. Yeah, I know what I have ot say isn't very important or even particularly nice, but a mediocre review is better than no review, right? I know how precious they are on AFFn these days... ^^ And the story, at least, was anything but mediocre; being a great fan of uke Sesssho, it kind of disturbed me that I liked this as much as I did. ^^

Now, normally I don't fully appreciate sonfics. I don't listen to music, chances are I won't know the lyrics, and I tend to find them distracting. This is no exception. However, I loved this story. I disagree with your previous reviewer about this being an evil Sesshoumaru and weak Inuyasha. In fact, that's kind of the creepy part. We have no idea what Sesshoumaru's doing. Actually, we know exactly what he's doing, just not why. This leaves us as baffled as poor Inuyasha who is so loved starved he will grasp at anything. This appears to be a one-shot and it works great that way, however I can't help but hope that you might want to expand it. I'll spend lots of time now trying to figure out just what's going on in Sesshoumaru's head because he must have some motive. Thank you so much

I know how things can turn dark fast when you don't intend for them to, but it's cool when art takes on it's own life