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by Atropa

schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! Don't you dare stop updating this fic. This is so unique and different that it is just too good for you to quit on. I am in love with the plot and I am literally begging you to update this! I need and update!!!
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Pleassse tell me you are going to post more of this story....OMG I so want to see what happens next...the story is absolutely AWESOME!
person Krys
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! I don't know if you did but you gotta finish this. all 4 got to get together. yummy. the men most definately if you gonna make all 3 her mates. me likey. sry this is my 1st review


~~~krys~~~
(krysten)
person Curious-George5498
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeez woman. JEEZ! I LOVE THIS LIKE NO OTHER.

Not only did you put all 3 beautiful men in a wonderful story, but you made the one female they all admire be Sango! I FREAKIN LOVE SANGO! And i cant help but admire how well you portray her, shes very stong and has a stong mind--you write that out very well.

I like how you made Vincent part of the group now, it owuld have sucked if he was still considered an outsider. Plus i LOVE the past part, 'Men also become mates with eachother...' ohh LALA! LOVING THIS, in fact i shall recomend this story in my own one in ff.net--your story and awesomeness is just THAT great!

Everyone is mostly in character in my opinion, i dont think you have to worry about that. Although the only thing you DO have to worry about is NOT updating--and soon! Oh i beg you, please update soon, we all need to see how this beautiful story turns out. You're wonderful!!

PLEASE, I BEG YOU, UPDATE SOONZ YOU WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL PERSON!
-Monica
person jem89
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this and ALL of your other stories! You're a great author. Please update soon :)
person Paula
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey this story is sooo good, I've been wondering when you were going to update, hope you do soon though REALLY GOOD STORY!!!
person OriginalSinner
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Atropa! You've outdone yourself this time woman *winks* V-I-N-C-E-N-T!!! My GAWD!!! Vincent AND Inuyasha AND S-E-S-S-H-O-U-M-A-R-U!!!!!!!!!!! Sweet Venus girl *sweatdrops* Isn't Vincent Valentine just a hentai's dream? I've kinda fallen out of the whole Inuyasha thing lately and have been dabbling with the whole FF fascination and have come to the conclusion that Vincent is way beyond hot (followed closely by Reno and Kadaj who are both as equally sweet as eachother me thinks) but irrelevent of who I think is hot and what not, can you imagine my adulation when I came across this story and found not only my favourite Inuyasha characters teaming up for a rollercoaster of hentai smut fest, but my fav FF character as well *falls off bed!* I was coming up to the end of this chapter and thinking that I'd hate to find that this is the only chapter you've posted... thank the gods there's still more to go *yippee!*

I loved this first chapter. As per usual, written in true Atropa-type style. Poor ol' Sango... so nice of Kagome's mum to take her in like that. Take them all in, in fact. I can just see Grandpa chasing Sesshie around throwing sutra's at him and Sesshie just tonguing to swat him like an annoying fly *teehee* And hot or wot Sesshie-kun forcing Sango up against the tree like that being the enigmatic tease that he is... And Inuyasha sneaking a little mouth to mouth on the irrate, premenstrual taijiya... loved it. And what or who is the surprise that *gods... what's his name again... the dude at the bar?* old mate anyway at the bar, has for Sango (please say it's a naked, gift-wrapped Vincent chained spreadeagled to the pool table *gurgling on drool*)

Better keep reading to find out *hehehe* Great stuff sweetpea...

The Sinner ^_~
person OriginalSinner
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I had to have a giggle. Sesshie’s jealous of Inuyasha kissing Sango before him… oh dear me… and confronting Inuyasha while his got a hair full of ribbons… what a crack… he must have it bad yeah. Ha! Sibling rivalry… don’t you luv ‘em.

And Sesshie when he finally caught up with Sango… hello… how hot was that “I just want to have a taste” *melts into puddle* KWOR!!! How horny is THAT?! And then our hot puppy turns pussy and questions if Sango could really hurt him. *teehee* Priceless.

Oh oh oh and Vincent!!! Hot hot hot…. Turning up in the well like that… I like how you did the crossover… very clever. And Vincent contemplating the puppies, thinking that Sesshie-kun was an ‘apparition of beauty’, pondering his attraction *slides off the bed!* Dang woman!! Holy shit… hentai’d thoughts racing a trillion to the dozen! Who would’ve thought… *gurgling* Vincent wants all 3!*wiping chin from drool* Such a naughty, naughty hottie…

Can’t wait for the party ~_^

Ta for the tease *hehehe*
person Inuyasha_is_mine
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o goodness gracious that was good! im so loving this story! a threesome and omg sesshomaru being a part of it! its already making me drool just too hot. Sesshomaru is by far my favorite character hes just too mysterious not to fall in love with! ^^ i hope sango isnt too stubborn and just mates with all three!! ugh id DIE to at least HUG sesshomaru -.- shes so lucky *sigh* besides all of my rambling you did an awesome job but when dont you ya know? your an awesome writer and i cant wait 4 the next chapter to this wonderful story..ja!
--ruby
person Trix
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE BIG THREESOME AND PLUS THIS HAS A GOOD STORYLINE AS WELL!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!