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for EXHIBITION II - Training

by SesshysJadedSamuri

schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Strangely, I was hoping he'd kill Bankotsu and Jakotsu at the end. Pity.
person rap
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. I definitely see how this was nominated at IYFG. Your writing is simply excellent and you do very well with the exhibitionism fetish. The Japanese you incorporate into your writing could use a bit of work, but other than that, you're great. Hope to see more from you. ^__^
person Reymond
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good effect. I love it. Thanks

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France,

Merely Truth
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow *mouth goes dry*... that was freaking hot WHEW. I love the whole exhibition thing anyways and this was wonderful! I love it, and I wanna read more of your stuff!
person Megan Consoer
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person bluemoon_175
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read your stories and they are really really fantastic, keep up the good work I can't wait to read more of your furure stories. With this one shot I think it would be fantastic if you made it into a story, but do what you want. :^) Cyz
person courtneyun
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was hot! One of the more tasteful multi partner fics I've read. I have to go take a cold shower now... Keep up the awesome work. BTW loved part one also.
person Amanda-chan
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it OMG your the best! Sad that it's over... but wow... even so... this one-shot blew me away!
person Sess/Kag Forever
schedule April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really like this story can't wait to read more. Great story.