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for In His Arms

by Nik

person sharem
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT story...most excellent...^_^ Booking it now in my Favorites...^_^
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All Im gonna say is: if I do not see an update by the end of the week, im going to personally hunt you down, sit you infount of your computer and make you write it! Dont take this as a threat because im only jokeing, all im saying is that im really empressed with this story and I want to see it updated often! so start writing and start posting!


your newest faithfull revier

Dawna Sama
person Mishka
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AhMahGAWD!!!!!
*hyperventilates* I can't wait for you to update this! Tsubasa needs to learn that mikos can defend themselves! He's sooooooo dead!
Ahah, and Shippou! Wai! The reuniting seems to be gearing up to be a tear jerker! I can't wait to see what you do with it! Go Sesshoumaru- claim that lovely miko as you mate! and you made her stand up to him- it's grea that she got her fire back and is not afraid to defend her slighted honour and scold her inu!
And sorry for the ramble, but I need to reeeee~ad!
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job, I have to admit I was worried I had another "Kagome is one of many concubines and gets tortured mentally and physically" fictions, but this one is unique and well written....it truly is amazing!! I only hope sesshaomru doesn't think he can keep his concubines when he mates Kagome because that would diminish her spirit and break her heart, no matter how nice they are..... since we already know that, from experience with kikyou, Kagome doesn't like to share her men......in any case, amazing work!!
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have two chapter 15's. Great new chapter though. Ooh and the surprise from Kouga. The Cliffy at the end. I love your style of writing too. Keep up the great work.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down in joy* Shippo's alright!!!!!!!!!!!! What do you know, Kouga actually used his head and did something usefully and nice. Tsubasa really really needs to die, I hope Kagome purifies his butt^-^ It would serve him right for going into her room without permission and after he has been warned not to touch her!
Please update soon, im very curious as to what will happen next.
person savewolf
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn keep up the good work love the chapter 15th it was great i was wondergin can you make sure sesshoamru tells kagoem ont he next chapter he loves her since she already admitte dit t him make sur ekoga dosent cause trouble for them and pleas eptu the lemon in witch sesshomaur and kagoem mate officially on the next chapte rif its not to much to ask make the chapter longer please oh and i woudl like to be friends can you send me en ameail with oure email adress on it but separate the letters (put a space between each letter and symbol liek this ( n o r m a m o u r a n i @ y a h o o . c o m ) ok?
person Aleya
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooo!!! I sat here and read the whole thing in one go!! And i came to the end already??!?! *ahem* Anyway, keep up the good work!! I'll be waiting hardcore for it!
person sugar0o
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O dun dun daahhhhhhhhhh... omg, i so hope that Kags gets to purify his ass enough for Sess to kill the rest of him. yanno even though kags is a slave in this, i so love this story.
person sabashi
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to your next chappy longer ones if possible