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is that the end? YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!!!

ASOTA

oooo. Me likey... sad... sad, but good. I thought the ending was pretty well done, i know how hard it is to end a one shotwith the shortness and all... You did good in any event. dont ya feel special having the section almost all to yourself? Lucky you... and your timing... Im glad i got sidetracked when i was checkin on the site tho. Your story is a good read, and you crammed a lot of action into a one shot... albeit mean cruel hurting Miroku action... oh well like i can talk, i killed the poor monk off in my fic... *sweatdrops* hehe... well anyway heres a positive if not entirely well thought out review from an avid reader. Bubye, and happy writing!