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YEAH WOOT! Nice first chapter wow...and to think he was only gone three days...again...wow, Nice job though I loved it I think it sould be a short story One-shots are no fun *Pouting* keep it up I'm off to the next chapter woot!

YEAH NICE ONE! WOOT! Yeah one more chapter comming ^_^ Can't wait, ok I think it should be a gril so a some point in the story Kagome could make a crack about how Inuaysha is gonna be fending off the boys like a mad demon, and Inuaysha actualy starts to get warry and all, and her name could be somthing like Sumomo(Peach), or Kyoui(Miracle) or somthing like that ^_^ Just a though you don't have to use them anyway nice job Up-date soon, and let me know when you do my E-mailing me if you could Domo Arigato Gozaimasu, MATANE!!!

Hey good story hope u update it soon.... I think there should be twins. One looks like Kagome and the other like Inuyasha. But don't know about names hope u make a good chapter for the last one, but hopefully u will do a few more than that

Well I like it & am looking forward to more. 1 slight correction; human = no claws so since he was human by the time he sat down he would have lost his claws, fangs & dog ears as well as his other demonic traits before he started touching himself.

i think that the pup(s) should be boy(s)

Hey
Loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one. I think that it should be twins, one boy and one girl.

Hello! I read your first chapter of this stroy right when it came out but there was a problem with my computer at the time so I wasn't able to review your story!
But obviously I've got it fixed and stuff so...ya.
NEWAYZ! THIS STORY WAS-IS GREAT! YOU SHOULD DEFFINANTLY MAKE IT INTO A STORY NOT JUST A ONE SHOT!
Also I think that Kagomes baby should be twins. One boy one girl. The girl could be the one who resembles Inuyasha in manner and languge and fighting while the boy resembles there mother-Kagome-in thoes areas. But in apperance the girl could have Kagomes hair, facial structure, and -of coure- body structuer along with snapyness. The boy could have Inuyashas hair, facial structure, and -Iknow its weird but deal with it it's my imagination!- Seshomarus stoic body mixed with inuyashas. The boy could have his mothers eyes, the girl her fathers.And of course sense Kagome was a miko and stuff...THEY COULD BOTH BE FULL DEMONS! that way they could each have certian powers like The girl could have earth and fire while the boy could have air and water. And when together HEART! No I'M just kiden --BUT I'm not kidden about the fir, eath, and water, and air thiing. But even as FULL DEMONS they would each have a pair of doggy/puppy ears! With the girl white ears with black tipps and the boy, Black ears with white tips. SRRY but I have thought about this alot latley!

TTFN;
megan

Keep it as a one shot, I enjoyed it. Not bad at all.

i'm glad aff is back and i can maybe read the old stories that were up here. i liked this one,... i can see it into a little story.. lots of one shots get turned into big storys some get so good they have 3 parts.. well i hope you keep up with this story it was great.

This was really great, I rated it a 5 ^_^! Well, I'm thinking that you should leave your story as it is because it's ending pretty much wraps it all up and doesn't leave anything hanging except for the baby issue. If you were to make it into a short story, i'm just wondering where you're thinking on taking it? What obstacles will they have to overcome now that there's no threat of Naraku?