rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed it! I think it would make a great story, plus I really, really like the fact that the story took place after InuYasha and Kagome were already mated. :)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I know all about the pain of losing a child as I recently had a miscarriage while I was still carrying my son. * sniffs * so this chapter was made sadder by that fact. You really should add a couple of more chapters to this story. It feels as if it could use at least two more. At least that is what I feel anyway.

Well, keep up the good work and I hope you update your others soon! I'll be watching!

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This story is really very good. You could take this up a notch by going a little bit further into the future. Why not having the dead pup's spirit come forth in some way and either protecting or saving one or both of his parents? It would even make a great ending; anyway, your writing is very good. Keep up the good work.

nice

You could have an enemy kidknap the children.. or hey why not have koga go crazy and take kagome so inuyasha has to find him and her.. or they could take the children and have them go out on an all out mission looking for the demon that feeds apon children or something .. OO and you could have inuyasha permenently transform like he will be so angry/rild up that he transforms but he like evolved it was always going to happen his blood just needed time to adjust thats why he was all wacked out when he transformed before because he wasnt ready but now he is so that will be cool i guess.

your fic was awesome ill give you that but...whats with the 'my love' crap? All the fluffy goodness of WAFF made me wanna puke. Well its not ur fault that im not a touchy feely person. The lemons were awesome though. What happened to the harsh talk like 'bitch'. sorry for the criticism...u can critisize my work if you want. lol ja ne!

I think that there should be twins. One boy who looks like inuyasha whit hair ears bla bla and one girl with black ears :)

I think it should be a girl....Becuz I have one... i named her shiori star Mcgill... shes my proud and joy.. I think kagome should have a girl... you can pick the name... i thank you for the story... and cant wait to see... keep going its good so far.
love Star

nice job. Like the story. Can't wait for the next chapter. As for the kids, I think that one would do just fine. Boy or girl, don't really know, I'll leave that up to the author. As for names, for a boy, how about going to the followig site to look.
http://japanese.about.com/library/weekly/aa072303a.htm