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for Between Enemies

by Brightdreamer

person SP777
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O-o-o-kay. I'm not one to read yaoi unless it has an ACTUAL plot or the first chapter grabs me. This was intriguing and I'm ACTUALLY wondering what's going to happen next.

By the way, liked BattleJoy's Omake Theater, it was funny! May I go out on a limb and say I'm a fan of her UNCOMPLETED story, 'Blood Runs Deep'. I'll have a HEARTATTACK if she actually finishes it!
person Aradia
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. When's the next chapter coming?
person Malik\'s Girl
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT! wow... that was very good and original (even though I HATE Kagura, she's a major bitch)... but there aren't really any cool girl in IY... only Sango, of course... Anyways, this story is so good!!! Luvd it! Sesshou is a real hottie... ^_~
person Nina
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kargura is not one of my favorite characters, but you've made this really interesting and very hot. I love Koga having sex with anybody, anytime. Let's get on with that threesome. Sess and Koga were soooo hot, more, more, more.
person Candace
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, This story rocks. It has the best of all world in it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I love that little addition with Inuyasha. "That was damn funny."

Yes I suppose I'm satisfied on some way. Although knowing myself. Now I want more yaoi ness lol. Or at least more threesome action ^_^.

Great chapter though. The confusion and whatnot was well done.
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wha!!!! This is so great!!! ^___^ You gotta continue soon! No more long waits in between. *sniff, sniff* Pretty please continue soon? *crawls on hands and knees, begging* I'm in awe of your raw talent! Continue soon! ^_~

Christy
person Bluegirl
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah, very interesting pairings, i like it. loved the Kauga and Koga moments (Koga's such a cutie, I could just picture him stairing all wide eyed at her ^_^) Looking forward to the next chap!
person Lychee
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oi! I've been waiting foreeeeveeer for you to update this! (sighs dramatically) it was worth it! Keep it going, okay?
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow you updated ^_^. I like this fic alot. I was hoping for more Sesshoumaru Kouga stuff though ^_^;. Maybe the next chapter hm? Lol. I don't really care for Kagura.