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for Taking over me

by Zinidy

person KitKat
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey um............ you didnt die or anything did ya? I mean, its been TWO YEARS since you last updated. I dont mean to sound pushie but i HATE it when stories go unfinished...... ^_^ anyways, luv you fic plzzzzzzzzzz update!!!

~Kitty
person Rei
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, you just have to continue!! I really like this story^^
person kagoma
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
come on u gotta come out wit the next chapter and fast!!! i gotta know what happenz!!! plz hurry
person please
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update, soon, pleaseeeeeeeeeeee, this is a realy awsome fic so far, I love it, and it'll just get more interesting, so please update, please
person Vegetas angel
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it is good start and keep up the great work.
person jewelmax
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! A week ago I wrote a songfic for Everybody's Fool by Evanescence. I should be posting it soon. Keep up the good job!
person sessylover
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
intersting, very intersting!!!!! please continue!!!!!
person PsYcHoKeLl
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not a bad start, but check your spelling. i'll be looking for the next chapter.
person hakuryuu
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice start!!! Keep it up, it looks like it's gonna be a great fic!
person aleaha
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think its funny how you chose to say "I'm going to make her feel better no matter what"...when I watch Inu Yasha I often have to watch it in japanese (with subtitles) but I here them say things like that all the time...like I'm going to kill Naraku for sure, I'm going to get stronger no matter what...I know I'm weird but thats what I though of so there's my review and I'm sorry it sucked