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for Cruel Fate

by Cleodasia

schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The rest!??? *dies*
person IamM
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack, no the second chapter cuts itself off! Oh but what a beautiful story this is! I can't help but read it over and over and over again and enjoy it each and every single time as if I was reading it the first time all over again. Wondeful my dear, absolutely wonderful. A work of pure art and magic.
person fredia
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummmm...interesting......at first i wanted to puke, cuz, come on, JAKEN???? AND SESS????? BWAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHA!!!!! but, when u made it apparent that jaken, has a human form, i was relieved with all the sick images in my head!!!! so, yeah, this is ok, nice fic.
person brown recluse
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You posted this on the Sesshoumaru Fanfic Site, too, didn't you! I thought I recognized it! Loved it then, love it now! This is one for the fave fics section!
person R.D.A.
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it I love it I love it!! Update update update! Plzz! And Inuyasha doesn't deserve the sword! Kill him!!
person Talon
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah...only the second DECENT yaoi fic I've been able to find while browsing the Inu section. *giggles* I was scanning the pairings, ect and caught the yaoi part...took me a second to realizy just WHY it sounded so familier to me!!

*HUGE GLOMP SMOOCH RAVISH*

And to those of you who are reading and NOT reviewing??? SHAME ON YOU!!! Don't you know my tsuin is a feedback whore and NEEDS those reviews? Besides, this fic is EXCEPTIONAL...even I looked at her funny when she told me about what she was writing, but my tsuin NEVER writes squick, so if you're reading the reviews BEFORE reading the fic...give it a chance!!! I PROMISE it is WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!

*plants a big, messy one on Dasia* Later, sug...
person Inugoku
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*chokes on the ramen she's eating* Wait, did you just suggest that Jaken and Mr. Fluffy Pants are getting their groove on....with each other?! Now that's plain weird!
person GreaterBeast_Xellas
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII , I love Jaken. And a humen Jaken *shivers* more
person narcoleptic dog
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NO! The second chapter cuts off...I can't read aore ore *cries*

That should give you an idea though, of how thorougly enchanting this story is. I had only ever thought of Sesshoumaru/Jaken as a parody, but you've managed to make it work. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful--but so very sad. In fact, I like it better *without* the lemon, and not because the sex was bad--but because it only accentuated how lonely they both were. And then there were the scenes of the imp-Jaken and his 'pup'...so beautiful. So very sad. This goes on my top ten list for sure. Please, ignore whatever flamers you get for this pairing--keep writing.

Please write more!