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June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love that Inu & Kag got together.... but i think this story is (in a way) more angsty that sexual.
You've got Kagome fucking everyone, but what about Inu, if Kagome's going to fuck everyone and
almost never Inuyasha, then Inuyasha should be doing the same!
You've got Kagome fucking everyone, but what about Inu, if Kagome's going to fuck everyone and
almost never Inuyasha, then Inuyasha should be doing the same!
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June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniff sniff* man I thought maybe this was a Kagome dominates everyone fic...but kagome's a whore is cool to, but you should make it up to Inu Yasha and let him prov to her what a Henyou could do when prevoked ~_^
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June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A plot??? HELLS no! This is way bomb without one!!! ^^ keep it up!
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think you should make the story have a plot. not just kagome screwing the world.
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One thing we haven't seen is two guys getting the same girl. No the time Sesshoumaru fucked Kagome and had her suck Inuyasha doesn't count. I mean two guys screwing the same girlone right after the other...or if you're kinky , double penetration,both guys get Kag at the same time.
There's so much more to add if it gets really kinky group sex..( next chappie looks like that could happen though ) gang bangs.... well you get the idea
There's so much more to add if it gets really kinky group sex..( next chappie looks like that could happen though ) gang bangs.... well you get the idea
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved the fact that everyone'sgetting fucked. You should put some plot into it though. Please don't mke kagome a whore. t mat make her a nympho. Maybe you shouave ave Inu Yasha take her back to the cavebut have her fall asleep. And then have him, over that next few chapters, discover how to get her to orgasamas much as she has so far, and have herget more powerful orgasms. let his demonic side come out as well, that way the rvaging can be truly instinctive. Andmaybe he should mark her too. Just an idea. Other than that, It was really good. A little strange, but good none-the-less. I want to know what happens next!
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you sould make Inuyasha and Sango have sex ^_^ PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
bring sessy back and have him and kagome go at it. hehe.
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think u should bring sesshy back to sango. he already did kagome, the only females left are sango, kikyo, and kagura. i say he should go with sango, and have this piss off miroku
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you make Inuyasha look like a pussy in this fic. i say a great ending would be for inuyasha to turn fully demon and wreck both sango and kagome, leaving sesshoumaru and miroku crapping themselvfterfter seeing inuyash's display