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for Bound and Breathless

by JezzabellasSoul

person the wheolfeolfe woman jennifer* out of .hack//*
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and female wherewolves are sexy and i'm a girl
person Nina
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. You can't leave this story hanging like that. It's not fair. Please don't abandone this story like so many others writers do.
person No One Knows
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad it was a dream, Kagome was being a real trap there! Well I hope you have a good vacation and write more soon, I can't wait to see what happens next
person da B
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ya noe wat b cool if it was all a deream that would explain all the oocness without having to put in a plot

person Katzztar
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe I like the twist.......Hmmmmm What will Inu-Yasha think about a girl-lovin between Kagome and Sango?? He IS part human and many human males have fantasies about watching two girls get it on. Perhaps he would allow it if he got to watch?
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story;)
Think you should make kagome a whore that fuck the world.
What the world needs now is more perverts
person I don\'t think I want to give you my name::Blush::
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you should bring sesshaumaru in for miroku and let inuyasha have the girls. ::Gwahaaaaa:: Then they can all share..

Oh God I don't believe I'm sugguesting that but DAMN its that kind of story!!
person Sakura
schedule June 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You should make this story with a plot or it will get kind of boring fast, but i had an idea since Inu-yasha toke Kagome's virginity make it that since he didn't mark her and he has demon blood she became a ninpho and since she marked him she took in some of his demon blood and now she'll keep on like that untill shes marked but that she has to be marked by someone who can control her. That i think should be Sesshomaru and if they get together after he marks her she\she'll change into a demoness because of her powers.
person CryinAngel
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i honestly think that InuYasha should tame kagome at the end you know make her his considerng that many couples i know do tend to party b4 settling down if u get my hint and if they didnt party b4 settling down the always wanted to so yes im still a hard core I/Kag fan
person KagomeRain
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dude just make Kagome the whore of the world but mostly inuyaha