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by jokhazen

person jokhazen
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol this is sad...i'm the author and i want to know what else happens... ... Write more me! I COMMAND ME TO WRITE MORE!
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... the sex scenes could use some better paragraphing, since they are a little hard to read. Still, I like the idea, and I LOVE the ending! I hope Miroku eventually forgives Inuyasha ^_^ I especially like the touch you added, about Miroku having fantasized about Inuyasha in the past. Very good!
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
decent
person AnnAnime
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good but you shouldn't have ended it like that.... it needs more chapters!
person Zendi
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! (kick Sango out of this story) I'm not a fan of Miroku/Sango. Beside, this part of Inuyasha and Miroku is great! :D