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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read what they do and what Naraku has planned for Kagome.
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I've just read it from start to finish in one sitting. I can't believe that you haven't received more reviews. This story is highly entertaining, funny and original. I laughed my ass off when Yusuke laughed at Kurama saying, "You chased her for 300 years and couldn't even find her house." That was great and soooo Yusuke. I love the character Selena. She's truly a vixen, lol. Kagome, Sess, Yusuke, Kurama and Hiei are all in character, but I think that Inuyasha is a bit too OOC. I realize that he's grown up, but even when people grow up and become more mature, they still retain some of their original playfulness or "bad habits". But it doesn't take anything away from the story so it's not that major.
I do have a question. You said that Rin and Sess were mates and she was still alive. How is that? Is it because Sess marked her? If that's the case, you should really explain that because it's a bit of a plot hole. And that's just a suggestion and not meant to be a critisism at all. Also, it would be great if you explained how many pups Inu and Kag had and where they all are. I'm assuming they're grown up with their own families but you need to incorporate that into your story. It's fun to know that kind of trivial stuff. That doesn't mean you need to have them show up or anything, but just give us a paragraph about them. ^_^
I'm so glad that Kurama finally got his vixen, but I think he's going to have his hands full with Selena. She's so funny. My kind of woman. Will Sess and Koga show up at some point?
Well, you've done a really nice job with this story and I'm enjoying it thoroughly. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Thanks for the great read.
Oh, you have several typos that could be fixed through spell check or if you'd like, I'd be happy to beta the story for you.
Good luck with the upcoming chapters and Naraku's return! He is such a badass!
Love and Kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver
I do have a question. You said that Rin and Sess were mates and she was still alive. How is that? Is it because Sess marked her? If that's the case, you should really explain that because it's a bit of a plot hole. And that's just a suggestion and not meant to be a critisism at all. Also, it would be great if you explained how many pups Inu and Kag had and where they all are. I'm assuming they're grown up with their own families but you need to incorporate that into your story. It's fun to know that kind of trivial stuff. That doesn't mean you need to have them show up or anything, but just give us a paragraph about them. ^_^
I'm so glad that Kurama finally got his vixen, but I think he's going to have his hands full with Selena. She's so funny. My kind of woman. Will Sess and Koga show up at some point?
Well, you've done a really nice job with this story and I'm enjoying it thoroughly. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Thanks for the great read.
Oh, you have several typos that could be fixed through spell check or if you'd like, I'd be happy to beta the story for you.
Good luck with the upcoming chapters and Naraku's return! He is such a badass!
Love and Kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a great story, i am caputred by how great it is..i hope u update soon and do u have a mailing list so i can know when this great story it updated?
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think you shouldscrap it. i enjoy it and it is a wonderful story. please continue. and i hope that you have a very nice day.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very good begining. Hope to see more of the story soon.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting start. I do hope to see more from you soon! Keep up the good work.