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for A Perfect Life

by Nelsonbannaba

person Leila Wu
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MAKES ME HATE HER EVEN MORE!
SO SHE GETS BOTH GUYS!?!!
What a skank.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I came back to this hoping you had decided to write more... *sniff sniff*
But I will leave more words of praise anyway for you certainly deserve them!

Wow oh wow... this would make a great intro to a full blown multi-chapter Inu/San story. Miroku just breezed back in like there was no
problem with him being gone for so long. And poor Inu he and Sango share an intense moment and the letcher comes back to ruin it.

You do well with painting a picture with your words it really pulls the reader into the scene, and I can't wait for more!!
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read it all but the ending leaves me wanting more!! I WANT MORE INU/SANGO!!!

OIs this done or is there more to come?
person Iyasu
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know exactly what I think about this fic. I mean, it was well written and everything, but can it really be called a Inuyasha/Sango fic? She kissed him. Okay. But it didn't really seem like it was any love coming from her side, just a need for companionship. And when he left, it didn't seem like that affected her much either, since she had Miroku back. *shrug* I don't know, maybe this one was just outside of my comprehension point.
person Ari
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellently in character. I can see this happening, oddly enough. Sucks that it didn't go further.
person linkthe2nd
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this fic! Please update soon!
person hk
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write another you cant just end it like that pwease *gets on hands and knees* write another!!!!!
person KenYasha
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Both beautiful and sad ... and somehow I mourn the fact that this is a One-Shot ...
I'll be happy to see more stories of you posted! :)))
person Angel_shae
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was. . .weirdish but cool at the same time. I love Miroku and all but he comes back and everythings over? What about Inuyasha? Doesn't he deserve love at all? (sniffles)
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it but I don't see how the rating should have been above pg-13?