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for Cry of the Heart

by Chrono22

person Fang
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for the lemony goodness I want it now. NOW. NOW! Alright I'm done. I love this story.
person Nahau
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the concept of your story, but the story itself moved a little too quickly. There wasn't enough detail about the characters feelings, like their thoughts. Although you did a good job explaining things, there was more action than plot. I hope to see you improve, and I believe you have great potential. Thank you so much for sharing and please continue to write.
person nessi
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like long chapters!!
hope you´ll update soon. ^o^
person simplyelena
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that I have read this story on Fanfiction.net. I enjoyed your story. Hope you continue.
person Midnight Star
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your cruel! Just when it was getting really good and juicy you had to stop! Update ASAP!!! I'm crossing my fingers for a really juicy lemon.
person LaLaMoon
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blue Moon. Rin went through a transformation? Rather vampiric wouldn't you say. Update soon.
person angeluswilliam
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed it and waiting for the continuation this isone of the best pairing for Sess I have read besides Sess/Inu.
Thank you for the enjoyable read