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by xcinamaticxstarx

person Cancan227
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person kagome
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is getting really good i cant whyt till you update and sorry about your computer i had that done to me one and it sucks. well i hope to see your update soon later
person ergo
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
at first i read the summary and found it a little bit similar to vvv's no smooth path to eros (she really needs to update) but you have put quite a humurous twist to it. the idea of kikyo as rin's mother is pretty new and i definitely like how inuyasha just keeps introducing his foot to his mouth. write more!
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is very cute! I think it is a really good beginning... cept for Inuyasha being a meany to Rin... that sure wasn't nice of him... but so in character right? Oh and the relationship between Kikyou and Sesshoumaru... PRICELESS! It kills... it's really funny! I love it!
person sumblink2
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad, I like it, its funny that Sess gets hit a lot and that Rin is the daughter, i never thought of it like that, where Kikyo is the mom and Rin is the daughter, Update soon.
person sumblink2
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, this is a funny story, update soon, I like that Sess is jealous and that Mirkou is getting married to Sango, its cute. Update Soon!!!!
person Koinu
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chappy ^-^ ... Keep up the good work and update soon
person notamawriter
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved i dont think you have to change a thing i luved it sooo plz write more i wana see when inuyasha comes into the picture
person cute mica
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plez continue writing this story i really like it:-)

ps:i'm too lazy to leave you a signed review
person Koinu
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story, I like that it shows a softer side of both Kikyou and Sesshomaru. Keep up the good work and hope you update soon

Koinu

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