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for Shades of Gray

by fallenangel7583

person cukid9
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I took a break from writing to read this chapter and all I can really say is: YES!

FINALLY! Totally excited that Inu made the connection about Kagome.

Now...about all that other stuff...uh oh! When Bankotsu showed up at the door, I seriously think I was right along Kagome in feeling like I was going to vomit (amazing how just bringing him physically back in the story can elicit such a reaction -well done). The tension is just getting thicker and, I'll be honest, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat in anticipation just waiting for it to explode -'cuz I have a feeling it's going to be nasty.

Great chapter (btw, I find myself liking Kikyo more and more...except...what has she gotten herself in to? Hmmm). As always, I'm looking forward to the next installment.
person chanda
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great update!It was well worth the wait; that last chapter was so good, I read it twice...lol. Also, it's about time Bankoustu got his ass kicked! I'm glad you're back, and I hope you're settled in nicely at you new place. Well until your next update...

Chanda
person cukid9
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really need to start taking notes when I read/review this...it seems that everything I want to say flies right out of my head by the end of the chapter, and I'm left with nothing more than a simple (and somewhat idiotic, I'll admit), "Ohmygod, that was so great!" -__-

I do remember, however, that I'm really loving Miroku. I think every time he makes an appearance, I'm cracking up laughing. He has such great dialogue that is this perfect blend of sarcasm and unnerving insight. And was that a Julia Stiles/"10 Things I Hate About You" quote in chapter 23, or am I just crazy?

I must say that I nearly went catatonic when Inuyasha made the connection (however tenuous) between Kagome and Titania. I had caught myself wondering, in the chapter before, how long it was going to take them to discover each other's alter egos. And then he started second guessing it...and I just wanted to shake him and scream, "It's HER!"

And Kikyo...ooooo, Kikyo! *laughs* I don't particularly like her, but I don't, by any means, hate her. I kind of just feel sorry for her.

What a tangled mess you've gotten your characters into! I'm loving it! These last two chapters were great (I was a little behind in my reading, obviously), and only served to make me more of an addict to this story. Hopefully, you'll find the time to write more soon (wouldn't it be great if real life would just butt-out and let you just write when you want?). I'm waiting for the proverbial train to actually wreck and see how you pick up the pieces after.
person weyrdkat
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wen.

Awesome chapter. Great sex. Must borrow a cig from the neighbor to climb down from that high. Perfection. Get your stuff (yourself?) in order girl, cause I need a major fix. Absolutely love the warm and fuzzies of family ties. Lovely, simply lovely. Maybe you'll inspire me to make a new blinkie. Maybe I'll draw Sha. Crikey, I'm gonna need a shower after that shag. mmm mmm I'd snog him myself if I could. (Sorry, too many British films with quirk email chats.)
person chanda
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, your moving... good luck, I know how much that can be one big pain in the ass. Please take your time, and this chapter was well worth the wait--as I'm sure your next chapter will be.

Until next time,
Chanda
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No worries!! I sure know how life can kick you in the butt sometimes!!! I know that when you can update the next chapter that it will be well worth the wait as this one was!! I am so excited to finally start hearing about Jiro!! The plot thickens!! LOL!! You know you have to wonder why Sesshie would even want to stay with Yasha when he can't stand him. I mean I know he wants out of his marriage too and all but still and why wouldn't Yasha want to believe in Jiro and talk to him, Sesshie sure never treated him like a brother so it only stands to reason that he would want to have a relationship with Jiro. Sesshie really needs to chill out and quit being so closed minded but I know thats Sesshie for you. It will be interesting to find out how he will react when he finds out he has a son. Yasha is getting closer to the truth about Kagome. I can't wait to find out what he will say and think when he does find out that Kagome is Titiana!! Face it Yasha noone is as they seem and most people have a dark side, look at yourself for instance!! LOL!! This story is incredible and I will be looking forward to the update!! I hope everthing works out in your life and remember no worries when you are able to update I will be there to read. Take Care!!!
Yashalove
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have missed reading this! Such a good chpater and I hope you get moved and settled in soon so I can see more!
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE don't tell me you abondonned this story!
person chanda
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see an update. Miroku what a dolt--it's too bad he wasn't aware on how accurate he was. Wow...soon Kagome and Inuyasha will find out about their alter egos... interesting. Kikyo--she lied again. Wow, why am I not surprised.

Kudo's on the Bathroom scene loved it!

Well until your next wonder chapter,
Chanda
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!! for the update!!

ok, I'm not sure if I've asked this before
But, have you considered a spin-off for the whole Sess-Rin thing you have going on?
or maybe have a Miroku-Sango side story...



I Love your writing!
If you can, just ignore my rampant imagination for continuations.