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by fallenangel7583

person debEdoo
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I joined adultfanfiction.net just so that I could leave a review for this story. From the first sentence, you had me. I've read this story, from front to back, several times. I fall more and more in love with it every time. I wanted to say that you are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of this story, hint, cough, hint!

Thanks!
person oneswish
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SCORE!!!!

this one is great.. well in an another chapter and wow!! miroku in leather pants.. do u think he has the butt for that?? so far the plans seems to becoming together.. but the real question is.. are they gonna get tangled up and kinda knotty?? plus a lack of communication.. is kagome gonna atleast tell yash not to worry.. i mean it seems weird that she would stop all contact. and is her face 200% healed.. no more nasty-ness.. and since bank kinda back handed her does she sport that love shade of bluish green bean muck??

yay!! im glad that u made another one.. this is the reason for inukag.. for me to look this and one other one. yea.. i have no life.
person jin1
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol WOW THIS IS LIK ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ.I REALLY REALLY CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER. UPDATE SOOn!
person weyrdkat
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sits up in her seat and puts down the cookie dough* Ahem. . . Closer and closer. . .and you updated again without telling me. . .WAHH!! :) Anyway, I'd drink and celebrate/mourn Miro's passing with them anyday. You've got a great characterization there. And as we get closer to the end, things get even more complex for everyone, even if you're explaining more. . .it's beautiful. Poor Kik. . .oh well. . .at least she's openning up and not being such a conceited bitch. . . kinda feel sorry for her. . .Congrazzles, I can't wait for the next chappy!! Hurry hurry. . . *Picks up her tube and flips back to the beginning*
person chanda
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas!

I'm terribly sorry I missed a couple of chapters, my computer died. Well anyway lets get on with the review. Chapter 26. I agreed with Sango and her fustration with Kagome, I probably would have done the same thing if my friend was keeping to many secrets. And Inu was listening...to bad he didn't stay long enough and find out that Kikyou now knows his and Kagome's secretive tryst! I can only imagine that the nasty blackmailer is Naraku? Interesting....

Well off to find out what happens next. Until next time,
Chanda

person chanda
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27. I like the plan that Inuyasha came up with...I can just imagine Miroku dressed in drag...lol! Loved the chapter, and I'm looking forward to your next couple of updates. Maybe Kagome should take her own advice and own up to her affair with Kikyou, since she suggested her cousin to fess up about the pictures. Sorry, if that didn't make sense, I'm tired and done playing Santa Claus. Well I hope you have a wonderful holiday! And thank you for the double update, it was a great read. I hope you win...good luck!

Until next time,
Chanda
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Short or long your chapters are always great!!! I always look forward to the updates!! Kikyo really didn't do much to keep Kagome there at the dorm like Yasha asked her too, did she?? You really have me baffled as to who Kikyo's blackmailer is. The only thing I can come up with is maybe Kouga or maybe Kikyo is just saying it isn't Naraku to throw off Kagome. I got a mental picture of the Roku would look in the getup Yasha done up for him and I thought I was going to fall over laughing!! With Roku's face it is hard to imagine him looking like that without laughing!! Will be looking for the next chapter!! Can't Wait!!! Take Care!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove
person cukid9
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA! I KNEW Souta was Kagome's! Well, I mean, I didn't KNOW, but you know what I mean. I think I might have actually almost cried in chapter 26...sheesh. At first, I thought Sango was being a little harsh, pushing too much. But I think that Kags really needed to tell someone what had happened to her (and, as the reader, it was nice to get some clarification...although, you allude to other things that were bad, so I wonder if those will be explained. NOT that I really need any more angst, because Lord knows Kags has been through enough!).

*snickers* I love Miroku's opening line in 27! Actually, I love that whole dialogue between him and Inu on the train...okay, okay, I'll just admit it: I LOVE Miroku in this story >_< He's usually only of minor interest to me when other people write him, but every time he shows up here, I find myself smiling and laughing. He brings the right amount of relief to an otherwise stressful story (thank you!).

And who is this mysterious man that is blackmailing Kikyo? Should I already know? Am I being dense? (Don't tell me!) I'll just wait and see. Oh, and YEA! She's thinking about breaking up with Inu...that will make things easier...right? RIGHT?

Hmm...what else...*glances at notes* >_< So...the final showdown is coming up, hm? The way Kagome is covering all of her bases in case something happens is making ME nervous! I can't wait to see her reaction when she finds out that Inu is Sha. She finds out, right? ARG! All of these questions that are driving me nuts...I love it!
person Lunar84
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AMAZINGLY WRITTEN! I honestly thought COTD would be the best work I'd read- I was wrong. I literally spent the day reading this fic and I must say it was absolutely wonderful. It's kind of odd but, it seems that the best inu/kag stories are A/U. You really do have such an amazing gift for telling even more amazing stories. I could sit here and gush all night about how good you are and all that jazz- but I don't want to seem like a kiss ass. So just know that you are one of the best authors I have had the privilege of coming across.

Now I know that since it is the Holiday Season that an update if probably going to be hard. Just know that your fans are looking forward to seeing more of your great work! Please update when time permits.
person darkmind
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh shit.. you are killing me!!!.. i'm desperate to read what happens in the club.... i want to know what part in the history inuyasha's brother (not sesshomaru) will play...

it's pointless to ask you to update soon... but i'll ask you to not stop because of x-mas...