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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PS -- I think I got the who Kikyou thing straight in my head now. . .that's the only part i was swimmy on.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for the next chapters.
Hurry please. Vai Vai Per Favore.
Hurry please. Vai Vai Per Favore.
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So glad you're not done with this story.
Cant wait for everything to unravel.
Update soon!
Thanks,
L
Cant wait for everything to unravel.
Update soon!
Thanks,
L
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I have been enjoying your story so far and I am hooked. And since I was also an English Lit major I am heartily enjoying the few missives you are sending that only another Eng Lit Freak would understand.
I keep on imagining the next scene with Kagome and Sha. He shows up as Sha, confesses--then takes off the Power Limiter in front of her...? I'm dying to see what will happen...
I'm just waiting for Kikyo's train wreak to happen...and of course for Kagome and Inuyasha to both realize who they really are...and maybe another good sex scene to boot...?
Accidentally in Love was my favorite chapter thus far...I'm looking forward to more chapters, please keep posting!
I keep on imagining the next scene with Kagome and Sha. He shows up as Sha, confesses--then takes off the Power Limiter in front of her...? I'm dying to see what will happen...
I'm just waiting for Kikyo's train wreak to happen...and of course for Kagome and Inuyasha to both realize who they really are...and maybe another good sex scene to boot...?
Accidentally in Love was my favorite chapter thus far...I'm looking forward to more chapters, please keep posting!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was an absolutely f-n awesome chapter. I couldn't breath the whole time i was reading it. I have read and enjoyed this story for awhile and can't wait for any other updates that you have on it. Again wonderful work and WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! WOOHOO to Kags for finally standing up to Bank!! Have a feeling though that Bank isn't quite done with Kags yet. Dang so close for Kags to finally find out who Sha really is. She is a smart girl though I bet it won't be long for her figure it out. Poor Miroku!! LOL!! Bet he wishes he had never went to that club. He just couldn't grasp the whole dominate and subornate thing. I hope Jiro shows up pretty soon. Can't wait to see what his part in the story will be. This story is one of my favorites!! I watch out for the updates all the time!! You are an excellent writer!! Hope to see an update soon!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove
Your Friend--
Yashalove
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update!!!!! I was so excited to see a new chapter posted. Will Kagome ever find out who Sha really is? I'm glad she had the balls to stand up to Bank finally. I'm thinking he's not just going to let her humiliate him like that in front of everyone.
Wonderful job on the new chapter. It flowed beautifully. Few minor spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing to make a big deal about. I'm really looking forward to another update!
Wonderful job on the new chapter. It flowed beautifully. Few minor spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing to make a big deal about. I'm really looking forward to another update!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an awsome update! Well worth the wait I might add. Boy Kagome was ever so braisen. Good for her! Prickostu, well he had it comming, and I know that Kagome isn't out of the water just yet.
Great work, and I look forward to your next update.
Chanda
Great work, and I look forward to your next update.
Chanda
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For the love of all that's holy, please don't take another 2 months to update. Like I said in a previous review: I joined this site so that I could comment on your story. From the first sentence, I was hooked. I've been drawn to it like a moth to a flame. Every single detail from the curve of Kagome's lips to (gulp) Inuyasha's body, every single detail was perfect, well thought-out. I'm in awe at this story and I look forward to the next chapter... fingers crossed that this is not even close to the end.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AARRRAAARRGH! Oh my goodness. . .that was powerful. I shouldn't be reading, cause I'm at work, but I couldn't stop -- even at the risk of getting caught. She burned Sha, oh that's rich! And looking at him and clearly stating it's not Yash, even after he used her name! I so thought he might come clean. . . or at least that she would recognize 'Roku. . . but with that kinda stress, I guess not. Oh well, I'm waiting for more as usual . . .waiting anticipating. . . "Through this palace, with sweet peace; Ever shall in safety rest, And the owner of it blest. Trip away; Make no stay;" -- I think the best advice Oberon ever gave.
Holding my breath,
Heather
Holding my breath,
Heather