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for Shades of Gray

by fallenangel7583

person jin1
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter... man kikyo is really dense..lol..updat sooner or later lol pleazeeeeee
person chanda
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That I think by far was the best chapter. I cried, I laughed and poor Inu caught in the middle. I know it was a while to wait. But damn girl! It sure was worth it.

Chanda
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again another great update!! No worries about the long wait. I love the story and I am excited when the update does come. Please don't just give up and discontinue the story. I know that life gets in the way sometimes so just update when you can. I loved this chapter. Sesshie is a little out of line, isn't he?? Man, how could he say that to Rin!! She should of hit a few more times. Poor Rin I do hope she will be alright. I just love Jiro!! He is too funny!! I think he is a great addition to this story!! Him and Inu must be twins when Inu is in his hanyou form. Inu is gonna have alot to explain to Jiro when this night is done. Guess he should of explained before they went out!! You know I know Inu doesn't want to blow his cover but man is this going to come to a head and he will probably wish he just had told all tonite!! This story is really getting good!! Can't wait for the update!! Take Care!!
Yashalove
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is so worth the waiting :) don't forget to update :d
person jin1
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I love this story i soooooo happy when i checked and it said another chapter was added. I was really happy to read the chapter and i was very impressed i mean it was sooooo good. wonder what happens next update soon :)
person chanda
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Has it really been two years. Man time does fly fast. First off, great chapter! Leave it to Inu, to let it all out, and how you written it--rocked!

*Crys* A cliffy... Oh, man! Gotta luv ya...

Okay, I'll wait until you update again, I know how chapters can be...

Chanda
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! But, I believe that "how are you" would be "comment a-tu" ('vas' being the conjegated form of aller, to go and 'a' being the conjegated form of etre, to be)
person Roanae
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love all of your stories! But this one is my favorite so far! I look forward to your next update!!!
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No worries about the chapters taking so long sometimes sometimes life just gets in the way!! I just read the last two chapters and they are just fantastic!! The confrontation between Bank and Kags was great!! Go Kags for putting him in his place at least for a little while anyways. I am quite sure that that was not the last of it. Dang, so close to finding out Sha is actually Inuyasha!! Even Bank said his last name Tashio and she didn't catch it, but I guess she had other things on her mind at the time. Miro is just too funny!! I just love the way you portray him. The line he said to Sesshie was classic!! I almost spit my coffee too like Yasha did!! Way to go Rin for putting that bigot of a demon in her place!! I would of done the same thing. WOOHOOOO!!! Jiro has arrived!! Let the fun begin!! Sounds like he does not look or act like what Yasha thought he would but I bet he will be as just as dangerous as he thought he would be. Yasha thought he had gone crazy when he finally figured out it was Sesshie's child and not Jiro's!! I can't wait to see the outcome of that little confrontation!! Shoot I can't wait for your next update!! But like I said no worries everyone knows how life can get in the way of some things!! Huge Kudos to you for your fantastic story!!! Take Care!!!
Your Friend!!
Yashalove
person weyrdkat
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY. . . .tragic beauty. I LOVE IT! I really like your characterization of Rin. That steel is something she will really need dealing with the ignorance of two different species of ass. And everything coming to light in one awesome explosion of dog-demon yumminess with Rin caught in the middle. It's cute that you made 'Jiro realize through smell, since Inuyasha practically lives with his limiter, and that blocks off his demonic senses. I love the Irish, ooooh how I love the accent. Might have been hotter as a Scot, but the Irish suits him much better. You did misspell Angle at one point, but that's the only thing I noticed. I'll be dancing in anticipation until the next update.. . .YAY for UPDATES!