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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. It's a good story. I really, really don't like kikyo, but it is your story and I'm loving it so far. Please continue soon, or I'll cry.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that wuz wonderful. I like it. Are you gonna continue updating, or are u finish for good?? It would be nice if you continue ^.^
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I looove a Kagome that is sexy and full of spunk and has that "I don't give a damn" attitude while still being submissive. Good start...veerry hot! I was reading this at work and I think my mouth was hanging open while I was reading it *laughs* As always, you do a phenominal job at creating a dark air about everything. You are definitely one of the best writers on this site and I'm so happy that you've started, not one new story, but two.
Can't wait for the update! ^_^
Can't wait for the update! ^_^
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The thing is, I don’t really like the typical "girl goes to get away from it and whores herself out" scenario. I still think you did a good job. This could be because I am quite a tolerant person... Oh, and the dirty talk between Kagome and "Sha" was pretty funny, I thought. Like it wasn't meant to be funny, but to the person reading it, it is. Probably because it sounds strange. Anyways...
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! I am entralled by this story. I adore how you've twisted Shakespeare in there. You've actually got me reading some Shakespeare now (It's about time I started. I think I've been putting it off.). :) Seriously, I am so moved by just this One chapter. God help me when you start posting more.
There was One line that made me guess who "Oberon" might be. "His eyes dug into her and for a moment, she was sure she was drowning in a Caribbean sea." I thought at first that it might be Miroku, and then Kouga came to mind. I think I thought of Kouga as well when "Sha" was chased away from Kagome by "Oberon". I Could see it being Naraku, but I have a feeling that it is not.
I love where you are going with this story. It's so magnificently breathtaking. I actually like how Kagome dresses too. It just fits. I love how she is incorperated into this world, and I think "Oberon" is simply fascinating. Oh, the Shakespeare! :) I adore it all. Every last bit. These are the stories I write dedicated reviews for. Please, don't plan on stopping now.
Until my next review...
There was One line that made me guess who "Oberon" might be. "His eyes dug into her and for a moment, she was sure she was drowning in a Caribbean sea." I thought at first that it might be Miroku, and then Kouga came to mind. I think I thought of Kouga as well when "Sha" was chased away from Kagome by "Oberon". I Could see it being Naraku, but I have a feeling that it is not.
I love where you are going with this story. It's so magnificently breathtaking. I actually like how Kagome dresses too. It just fits. I love how she is incorperated into this world, and I think "Oberon" is simply fascinating. Oh, the Shakespeare! :) I adore it all. Every last bit. These are the stories I write dedicated reviews for. Please, don't plan on stopping now.
Until my next review...
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this, even if the Shakespeare allusions are over done. The whole 'willing-whore-for-everyone' thing I think sort of destroys the Master/Servant thing as I thought subs were supposed to be pretty monogomistic but as I don't actually participate, I can't say for certain. I just don't like the fact that Kagome is such a slut. She seems to have no self-respect. As for the Oberon, I think I know who it is but I don't want to guess!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had to leave my mark lady!! I reviewed you on MM too.
I love this & i can tell it's gonna be pure hotness. Leave no
stone unturned!! I wanna see it all! Slurp :P
I love this & i can tell it's gonna be pure hotness. Leave no
stone unturned!! I wanna see it all! Slurp :P
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods! I love that first chapter girly!! But...but gods do u have to bring kikyo into this? She's such a bitch!! Ah! I want to rip her hair out! Lol sorry please update soon!