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for Shades of Gray

by fallenangel7583

person cukid9
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure that I haven't reviewed this since I read the first chapter. Unfortunately, after reading the last three or so, I've completely forgotten specifically what I wanted to say *sigh* I guess I'll just generalize...

I love your dialogue, especially between Inuyasha and Kagome, but the exchange of insults between Miroku and Kikyou are really funny too.

I really like, too, these multi-faceted characters you are building and intertwinging with each other. The only one I have complaints about is Miroku, who seems to be a little flat when compared to the rest. But, as I always do, I won't make any real descisions about him until you write more -I always trust that the author knows what he/she is doing. I like how everyone has a past, everyone has problems that they hide behind a sarcastically smiling facade.

I love the interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome's alter egos at the club. Those scenes are the ones that truly make me crave more of this story.

Hmmm...I can't remember anything else that I wanted to say. Oh, I REALLY liked the end of the last chapter where Rin pretty much tells Inuyasha about himself and Inu sucks on Kags finger...that was GREAT ^_^

Can't wait for the next installment -I'm bookmarking your author page so I don't miss it again!
person TapTheMemoryBank
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! The future for those two is looking sexier every day! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
person kerya
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. the move inuyasha just made was...like wow. ive got to see what happens next! i want to know what happens when they finally find out that they know eachother...form the club!! please update as soon as you can!!!
-kerya ^_^
person TapTheMemoryBank
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL!!! Your story is well thought out and brillant!! Please continue as soon as possible! This story is mysterious, romantic, classy, and just overall GENIOUS! All I can say is great job and this is a story i'll be checking back to read everytime i'm on. Thanks for writing something so beautiful.
person celest
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Continue. Is Inuyasha ever gonna get his wish to do Kagome? Is he gonna get rid of Kinky-hoe? Hope so. Love the story so far. Please continue.
person chanda
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again, another great chapter. I wonder who Oberon is? I thought for sure it was Sesshomaru aslo...and it's definelty not Naraku. Hmmm...whoever he is...what an asshole. *Clapping hands* I'm glad you're back...you have such talent with the way you write.

Until your next update,
Chanda
person chanda
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're writing again. I just loved this chapter. Update soon.

Chanda
person chanda
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, it's been a while. I loved the first chapter...very hot!! I hope you update this story soon. It's been really good. I look forward to the chapter where they find out their duel personalities. The Shakesperian, twist was nice also.

Look forward to your update,
Chanda
person InuGrrrl
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have much fun with your fics -you know this! ^_^
I had to come up in here and review, even though I
made my mark at the other site. You're one of my
faves (and trust me, the list is small) because you
create excellent scenarios and dialogue. Brilliant,
Ms. Dragon! *applauds*
person Ari
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You. Win. The internet. Please continue.