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Very delicious...

LOL. No problem babe...I got your back. I loved this chapter! You did a wonderful job-as always. I also love your wit, its great! I raise my glass to you salute!

Well off with my own delema of who is the better beta for stranded...lol. Oh, the joys of grammar.

Until next time,
Chanda

Another excellent chapter! I don't know how you do it, but you definitely have a gift for writing! And as usual I cannot wait to see what you write next! Everytime I come on the site I look to see if you have updated because you totally rock!!!!! Awesome Job Once Again!!!!!!!! YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :)

*Jumps up from knees and dances around* Whooo hoo....Finally you have updated and as always very great read... though I was expecting Inuyasha to run in claws a blazing and rip Bankotsu to shreads... that would have been nice... did I just say that? Wow... you story is making me a little violent but in a good way... brings out my inner dom-female attitude, and let me tell you she is definently hiding in here somewhere...so yeah... I was hoping to get some closure for Kagome for this chapter, though you holding off on that probrably means when it finally comes it will be
A-mazing... so yeah keep up the good work *drops to knees and bows humbly* Dont leave me waiting to long oh goddess of the adult fanfiction site...lol thanks

that was so good. update soon

Please post new chapter... I am going throught story withdrawl... I want to know what happens or else I am going to turn into a stephen king novel by the name of Misery you know the one that was made into a movie with kathy bates... yeah... lol just kidding...I want to know what Inuyasha does... and what happens next to kagome... grrrr please update soon

OK, that was murder. No literally, I have to say that if you do not allow Kagome to go to someone for help, I shall have to hurt you. I don't mean to presume, but Kags has to have more brains than to allow herself to be hurt LIKE THAT by the man she once loved. There is a difference between s&m and flat out abuse, this crosses the line. Kagome needs to get away from him. PLEASE give her the strength to get the hell away from him. Not to be a story pooper but this is beyond crazy. And yeah, we know, Souta is actually Kagome's child, Kagome's and Bankotsu's. Sorry to seem flaming but Kagome will be the most amazing character ever created if she leaves this farce of a relationship.

Okay... This chapter made me upset to the pint I cried... I wanted to reach through the computer screen and beat the living shit out of Oberon/Bankotsu(sp?)...The whole time I am thinking someone will come to save her, but alas no one did...I think that Inuyahsa is going to be infuriated when he finds out what happened to Kagome... however that is a given...I think Oberon definetly had a beating in store for him... damn bastard knows better than to do her like that... blah makes me sicky in my tummy... grrrr.... but more so I want to rip off his imaginary penis and feed it to him see how he'd like that... anyways now I have said way too much and have gone off on a tangent...Ja Ne!!

*Gets on knees and prays* That was so dark...wow....really really dark, but also really really well written. You've done it again, another excellent chapter filled with raw emotion that most authors can only dream about bringing to their story. As usual I'm looking forward to the next chapter because it's always exciting to see what you come up with next. Bravo!!! Another fricken job well done!!! :)

I love this story. I like the direction your last chapter has taken and cannot wait to see where it will end up, hopefully Inu coming to the rescue and kicking Bank's ass XD

Anyway, to the point. I sit here and read a lot of the Inu/Kag stories and most of the time I am not impressed. Yours is one of the few that I look forward too. I look forward to it so much that its inspiring me to do some fan art with it. I wanted to make sure that was okay before I go posting anything I may do based on your story on my site.

You can see what I do (though I've got about 20 more pieces not uploaded or finished that I like better than what I do have posted) at:
http://ladystarshimmerr.deviantart.com for all art, including linearts.
http://brokenmusouka.deviantart.com for finished digital works only.

The art stretches back as far as things I did ten years ago, aka this is me defending the ones I think are terrible but still posted anyway for some reason. lol

Anyhoot, keep up with the awesome work, and I can't wait to read your next chapter.