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Another bomb ass chapter!!!!!!!!! I can feel the suspense building. Everytime I read it I have to wonder what's going to happen next. I'm going crazy reading this because I have all these different ideas swirling through my head on what really is going to happen........AND IT'S AWESOME!!!! Anyway! I'm so excited to see where you take this because there are so many ways for whatever is going to go down, to go down.....your writing is fabulous and it's not predictable like most other stories and that is something I LOVE about this story. You did A DAMN GOOD JOB once again. I'm on every day to see if you have updated and I cannot wait for the next chapter. YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

I loved it! I like how you write Inuyasha too...lol. And, look forward to his reaction when he finds out about Kagome? Or whatever your creative mind have in store for him.

Bankostu being in the room with Kagome and twisting into a dream like state...was brilliant, and you pulled it off so well.

Thanks, for the review...

Until next time,
Chanda

I used to be in a relationship like Kagome had with Bankotsu. I was lucky that the guy never turned violent and I was able to get out when I wanted to. I feel so sorry for Kagome.

Damn... remind me never to cross YOU... if you can dream all this up then I worry about you. But a very good hour read, I liked it and I do hope you continue, it seems to me like Bank is coming after kags and not sha, could it be that he is afraid of Sha? I think he may be and I HOPE Kags finds a way out of this. Bankotsu had better PRAY I never get my hands on him. I have a 9mm that has his name on it. one between the eyes and all his worries are gone. Patiently awaiting what Kagome is going to do.

Holly S

that was very good

Okay... wow *grabs bowl of popcorn* I was like OMGodzilla he is going to kill her.... oh shit...thank gods it was only a dream phew.... Still waiting for Inuyasha to find out... I want some hard core I'll-kick-your-ass-if-you-ever-touch-my-girl-again action*punches fists together*... or better yet I'm-going-to-kick-your-ass-because-you-almost-killed-her kung-fu style*jumps up and starts kicking and punching the air*...lol... what am I saying? More Violence... and wait a sec I just thought of this...where did Sango disappear to? hmmmmm... did you forget about her? Oh well... no one for Miroku but Jakotsu...lol anyways I love this story it just keep getting jucier and jucier... and the plot thickens dun dun dun... so yeah ummm Im strange...I bid you adieu...

I love the suspense personally, but gosh update soon!!!

This is an awesome story-- right up my alley with this BDSM goodness. :) I love it and cant wait to read more

Okay, I just finished reading the bits of your story that you have posted, and I must admit, your work is awe inspiring. i certainly have gotten a few inspirations. (A French speaking hanyou? Tre's magnific) I'm glad to find someone on this site that's not afraid to be a bit darker without being distasteful and thank the kamis, you aren't afraid of the English language and all it's proper uses. Arigato for that. I look forward to the rest of the chapters, and I impatiently await your updates. Sadly, however, I will not embarass myself by joining the dancing. Please add me to your list of those with emails patiently (or rather im-) awaiting your new work.

Ja ne',
Weyrdkat

Wow... First, thanks for not being mad at me for my review, muchas gracias. Second, I really appreciate that you ARE looking to evoke emotion here. Third, and most important, This chapter was really fantastic, I love Kag's thoughts while she is so out of it and Thank You for giving Jak the balls to stand up for her. I wish all battered women had a champion like Jak, someone that really wanted to save them for who they are, not someone who wanted to save them to bang them. I love the whole sitch with Mir/Inu and the whole *soiling his sheets* bit. This really does rock. Mad Props to you and pray continue, I REALLY want to see where you're going next.

Fantastique! ******** out of *****

Holly S