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Wow I LOVED this chapter, in fact i love where the whole story is going. But i MUST point something out (Not bad x]). Have you ever heard of a band called Waking Ashland? Well it turns out they have a song called "Shades Of Grey" I was wondering if you ever heard of them? I'm not quite sure if it fits the story, I'll leave that for you to decide http://youtube.com/watch?v=AjwMlmvq-_o It's not quite the full song but you'll get the main idea. Well ANYHOO, great chapter, great story.. you've got me hooked and you'll be glad to know you're top on my favroites. :]

Sincerely Yours,
Addicted Reader

First and formost...let me thank you for the extra long chapter. Sometimes even if it takes a little bit longer for an update...it is better to read a long chapter than to read two or three small ones. Why you ask? It is because I hate being in the middle of something so deep and so steamy only to have an author say....until next time. I find myself engulfed in stories, especially ones by you. You are very talented and this lil lemon was very hawt. Now these two at the moment are telling themselves that this was it..no more fluff...but really..the sexual want and desires these two are sharing is so intense....how are they gonna make it? Hmmm..I shall be waiting to see..Oh and just when is our smart houshi gonna spill his theory to the hanyou? Or will Kags finally admit to what happened to Yash? So much drama....thanks for the update. Take care until next time!
Neddi

I dont know I think I may be coming over to the dark side... I have never been a fan of the bdsm or anthing in that nature... but I am starting to think it is pretty hot... maybe I dont know it just doesnt sound as dirty when you write about it if that makes sense.... so no I wasnt disgusted and I am so happy that they finally got together and FYI I think Sango is a total bitch but thats ok because if this were real time she probrably would be a feminist lesbian... lol... anyways I am so glad that you updated great chapter and for some odd reason I felt the need to cry.... i dont know why I have just been super emotional over everything lately things I read movies, music blah blah blah now I am rambling...but yeah this chapter was totally SExy... sometihng I havent seen in a long time keep up the good work. *REVIEW from YOUR FRIENDLY NEIGHBOORHOOD SPIDER WOMAN*

::giggles excitedly::
Yay! Finally!
Bankotsu must be really pissed at this point... wouldn't know where to find his pet. For some reason I have a feeling he's gonna show up sometime soon. And What's Kikyo gonna have to say about Kagome staying with Inuyasha.

OH! btw, Is there gonna be an side story for Rin and her baby?
can't wait for the new chapter.

Hey! I know how bad it is when your stuff gets deleted, thanks for rewriting some comments. I usually end up on the same wavelength with a lot of the writers I read. . .maybe it's because I understand that the characters take up a life of their own and can't really be forced to do anything that's not part of their character. I understand why Inu doesn't see it, and I also understand that it has to be getting harder to make it seem feasible. Although I'll buy the fact that he's a little (okay maybe a lot) out of it and in his own issues. :)

Well, we all know who Rin's kid is for, so it's not fair to say a character from COTD will make an appearance when he's that obvious, so I figured it's him or the Panthers. . . and since they haven't shown on campus yet... i can't wait to read your original one. It sounds like you could do a lot with it. . .My Inu story will soon get a facelift and become a wholey original instead of a fan fic and see what I can do with it.

Calling to Sha would just put the cap on the fact that she's so enamoured of him and would open up a whole world of fun for Inu to mess with her. That wavelength just floats the same way, huh? Okay, well. Another great chapter, and a very very sweet lemon. . .lots of sugar and some ice cold realizations (lemonade anyone?) I do like the fact that she realizes how well she was 'trained' and that he can read her reaction as well. . . very skillfully done. Okay, I'll shut up now. *MWAH*

Beautiful, I like how you made them connect and hate doing so. This was a true work of art, sorry for not being more eloquent but I am bowled over and deeply moved at this point. I loved the shift in focus from the whole bank/kag to inu/kag, and how he was so noncommital in answering questions about his relationship with Kikyo. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.

*bakes you sugar cookies in the shape of puppies*

With respect to your busy schedule, Please update soon. And stop by my story Call Center Romance.

Holly S
"I must leave, for there they go and I am their leader."

another wonderful chapter and I was so happy to see it updated! Great job and please please update soon!

Well that chapter was a bittersweet symphony. To have what you cannot have...but I'm sure you'll come up with something to get these two together...lol.

Loved the chapter. Congrats with winning...I think that's great and you so deserve it!

Well until your next update.

Chanda

Im fricken speechless so I'll say only one thing.............you fricken ROCK! :)

It is really going to be interesting to find out how those two figure out who the other is. I see that you said Inuyasha can't put it all together cause he is right in the middle of it but if he would take off that limiter he would be able to smell her and put it together. Well I think that Inuyasha being Inuyasha that it may even take more than the smell for him to put it together. Sometimes I think you really need to slap him and put it all out in terms for him to understand it all cause I agree with you when you say he is about a couple fries short of a happy meal!! LOL!!! I really do love this story!! It is one of those that you just keep looking for the updates!!! Oh I do have a question though, has something happened to Songo to make her so untrustful of people? Dang did she go after Inuyasha!! She seems to think noone is capable of concern and compassion for Kagome but her and she hasn't even been around for years. Makes you think of what has happened to her, you know!! Will be looking for the next update, hope its soon!!!