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for Shades of Gray

by fallenangel7583

person evasal
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter! who is this man that sesshomaru hates?!?!?!?! i MUST KNOW!! lmao

it feels like somthing big is going to happen! i can't wait to find out what exactly that is!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh yes.... wow Sesshy had some fairly good come back here. Clothes or large amounts of ilegal substances? hahahahaha that was classic-- next time someone asks me what in my purse....

Great story and please update soon!!
person chanda
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it...no that wasn't what I expected...lol. Have to love the occ-ness. Can't wait for another chapter.

Until next time,
Chanda
person katome
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Girl, you are killing me here!!!! I was wondering when Sesshomaru would make his appearence, Perfect timing. Oh my god, will Kagome and InuYasha ever figure out who they really are!! Don't keep us all waiting too long for the next update, K? This story rocks!
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm Im still laughing at Mirouku. "I dont swing that way unless Im sloshed." PRICLESS!!

I love it. Please please keep it up! Ill send you an email soon myself!
person weyrdkat
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*does a little happy dance before returning to her poptarts* Yay! *stops chewing and looks up. . .* Want one? Hehe. . .I really liked the title to this chapter. There are moments when you are just so worried about the last thing you've done or said that the only thing you can think of to break the awkward silence is even more awkward. I really felt that when you put them together on the way to school. . .and the sxplosions. . .masterful. He knows he's on edge. . .hell, the whole world knows it, and yet he still can't suppress his reactions. A very good character definition. I had the feeling it would be Sessh paying a visit and not his father. . .seemed too out there for his father yet. . .but ironic twists are wonderful. (well, at least "speak of the devil." :) I really liked your summation of Miro as well. . .It is often easier to create your own persona rather than hope others get somewhere close.
Surprises are good. . .very good. Soon as needed, no rushing natural flow. Awww. .. who would ever not want to read about the HAWTness of another Inudemon? Of well. . .maybe this fic isn't right for him to come barging in on. . .I think it would offset the balance a little much. Specially since you've worked up Naraku as a decent guy so far. Oh, and with the bad days happening recently, I'm uber-looking forward to that FIELD DAY. I'm sure it will be yummy and a half. Cheers!
Ja ne,
Weyrd Kat
person chanda
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...you did it again another great chapter. I loved the awkwardness between the two. It was very realistic like always.lol. Oh, no Inuyasha just found out he's an uncle and what luck...Dear brother came for a visit.

Well until next time,
Chanda
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*DUN DUN DUN* So the plot thickens... and Daddy comes to visit... What does he have to say? Is Inuyasha going to get his butt kicked because he knows whats going on? hmmmm so many questions so little time... Totally enjoying this I wait for you to update all of the time and here you have so... Whoowho... OMGodzilla the morning after was definently akward well I mean why wouldnt it be... kagome just slept with her cousin Kikyo's boy toy and after what happened it may have been to soon... but if you ask me Kikyo should just disappear and never come back is she were real I would poke out her eyes and make her eat them... i mean... what!?... ummm so yeah keep up the fantastic work...*grabs hand and places a kiss on your palm* Until we meet again Dearest...
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!! The plot thickens with Rins child. I thought when you first mentioned Rins kid that there would be something more to that. It makes me wonder even more why Rin didn't tell Sesshie that he has a child. This story just keeps you on the edge of seat wondering what will happen next. Poor Yash just keeps getting blamed for what happened to Kagome. Can't wait for the next chapter!! I have to tell you that you are doing an execellent job on this story and I wish I had just a little bit of your talent.
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
WONDERFULL story. Ive been reading it for the past month, but now I'm anxious.... Whens the nest chapter comming up? Please, please, please, tell me the answer is soon! Keep on writing!