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Congrats on finally finishing 6 years of College!!! That is wonderful!! I know you are just beaming about that!! Lots of luck for your upcoming finals!! I am sure you will do great on them!! Once again another great chapter!! I hope Rin just takes matters in her own hands and calls Sesshie. For some reason I get the feeling that Sesshie can really be a big help when it comes to Bank. But I could be wrong, you have surprised me more than once with the story. It is one of the reasons why I love this story. I love the way you have written Miroku. I think its great to see Miroku with some attitude rather than so sweet all the time. I liked that Kagome got some backbone with Bank on the phone. Poor Jak is going to be in some trouble for telling Kagome about the other girl. I understand that trust is a big issue with the dominat/sub thing but holy crap I would of been more pissed about almost being beat to death, but like Rin says I guess thats just me!! LOL!! I can't wait for Jiro to make his appearance. You said you have been having some trouble with how you were going to make him work in the story but I know you will figure it out and it will be fantastic!! Sounds like dear ole daddy has Yash stuck in the marriage to Kik. I am looking forward to finding out what he has to make his sons do his bidding besids the whole money issue. Kik was just a little pissed off wasn't she. Makes you wonder just how much Kagome will give up to Kikyo about what she is involved in. That was a shocker to me, I never thought with the way that she talked about Kagome's mother that she would care so much about what is going on in her life but I guess seeing so many bruises makes a difference. Well I guess I will shut up for now, I could talk about this story forever it seems like. LOL!!! Can't wait for the next update. I really enjoy this story. Huge applause to you once again!! Take Care and Much luck again to you for your finals!!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove

ooohhh!!!!! things are getting good. rin will have to find out sesshomaru is in town... i'm excited!

can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the great work!

Woo HOoo!! More great Miro lines. . .and I have tequila this time. . .we'll get this party started. . .hot guys and lots of fun. I can't wait to meet this 'Jiro. . .he better BYOB. . .:)

I like that Kagome was finally able to spill to someone, even if it feels like Rin hold too many cards. I can buy the whole intern thing and knowing a bit more cause of Sesshiles, but I don't know. . .it still feels like she knows a bit much. ..but I suppose the fact that for all of her research, she still didn't know about his dark side kinda balances it out. . .the lack of sub/dom knowledge kinda helps that too I suppose. Can't wait for the new chapter, since I just saw you were on. . .I'll be posting a new chap to Mission soon on Myspace.

I love this story! Great job and keep the work up. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I knew it!!! Best chapter yet, keep it up, girl.

Little Miss Rin is one smart cookie!! I am really glad someone could figure it out. Woohoo!! Sessh to the rescue but I am quite sure it won't be that simple. Kudos to Miro in this chapter. He maybe scared of Sessh but sure ain't afraid to voice his opinion on him or Kikyo. Poor Yash really needs to break away from Kikyo. I think he really needs to just stand up to his father. LOL!! Seems like both sons are scared of him!! I can't wait till this Jiro guy comes into the picture!! As much as you said about him really has my curiosity up on him and what his line will be in this story!! Another great chapter you have written!! Applause, Applause, Applause!! Can't wait for the next one!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove

Yet another beautiful chapter, I like Rin-- shes so sweet here. I have to pause and snicker at the name Fluffles lol and I look forward so muchhhh to the next chapter!!

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I loved this chapter...boy Miroku was pissed, and he is more than welcome to lash out at Kikyo more often...lol.(That was great!) However, cutting off the fluffster's hair... well I'm actually suprised Miroku's still around.

I'm glad that Kagome confessed what she could to Rin, and vise versa.

I take it these new characters, are going to be interesting--maybe even be the ones to help bring prickostu down! LOL.

Well until next time...take care,
Chanda

Thanks for sending me back to chapter 7 for a refresher course on my memory!! Sometimes I think my memory goes into a lapse or something and I forget what I have already read. LOL!! Thank you for the encouraging words for a writing talent maybe sometime I will try my hand at writing something. I really enjoy reading your story it is one of the best I have read and it just seems to get better with every update!! I am actually very proud of Yasha for taking Miroku's advice and talking to Sesshie!! I ain't very often you see him doing that unless it is for Kagome!! Update as soon as you can, I will be waiting!! By the way I can't draw either!! LOL!!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove

Woo hoo! *catches herself before spraying M&M cookies in her exclaimations* Yummmy yummy *offers some to the group* And I don't mean just the cookie party! Fun new names, fun new conflicts. . .sexy demons. . .I can't wait to see this new character. Maybe members of the family always have interesting back stories. And, half the fun is writing them. Daddy dearest always has a pion to do the dirty work for him. But, that's what makes him powerful. Miro has some great lines in your story. I dislike those that make him either 'holier than thou' or retarded. He's a bit of a perv, but the boy has brains. Woo hoo! Field Day!! :)
Anyway, about this chap: You did really well with the unsureness of Sessh, without making him like a scared teen. . .he oozes masculinity and ice, and it often makes for a difficult combination. . .(as I'm finding with a character of my own nicknamed the Ice King) I enjoyed it, but now I think I'm going to go back and reread from the beginning again! YAY!! >^.^<