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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please don't stop this here conuitue even if its just one review from a reader that is very much enjoying this exept for the clifhanger part .
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write more chapters.
i usually never do this or even say please but i have to know what happens or i will die *drama queen*.
i usually never do this or even say please but i have to know what happens or i will die *drama queen*.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update...plz. Why did u have to end the chapter like that. I want to read more of it. plz continue.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
intersting plot so far could you please up date and make chapters longer???
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. You have me intrigued. Please continue. (I don't normally give such short reviews, but I just plain don't feel good right now.) Snow
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo Kagome, Inuyasha, and Sesshomaru destroyed Naraku, and i think Sesshomaru is such a jerk for trying to take the Tetsaiga. Anyways very interesting chapter, can't wait to read more, please write more soon.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. No update, man that so totally sucks.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
COOL! I LUV IT!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why do you have this story in both sections?
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing storyteller who is in need of a Beta (Yes, that was an offer).
“…his incarnation on one side…” Shouldn’t it be “incarnations?”
“…Naraku was [dead] serious…”
“…and [youkai] making…” One youkai, two youkai. (One fish, two fish.)
“…his incarnation on one side…” Shouldn’t it be “incarnations?”
“…Naraku was [dead] serious…”
“…and [youkai] making…” One youkai, two youkai. (One fish, two fish.)