rate_review Reviews

Great chapter Koday, I likey. Hah! I can't wait to see exactly how Kikyo will exactly attempt to get rid of Al, I'm sure it's gonna be explosive in a very entertaining way. I was wondering how long it was gonna take Max to put 2 and 2 together about when they were LOL Mental thoughts on how a public bathroom would smell to an inu-demon...blech! Just sick and wrong. BTW When I read your comment about being a lil shy flashing your fanboy-ness around on your deviant site I had an outside mental picture of what Mitsuki and I looked like raving and ranting about the creep factor level for a Naraku possessed Souta in front of my co-worker Alysia, and kinda gulped remembering that she only smiled on in this politely confused way. Damn, another opportunity to convert the masses missed! :P

>=D

great chapter... amusing, intelligent.

thank you,
ginny

Okay, I don't have much time so...I loved the ending. still laughing about it. looking forward to more. oh, and as usual, kikyou's gotta be put down, preferrably hard and painfully

Oooo big fat and creepy plans... hasn't Kikyo suffered enough?? :P I love it that you are exploring the inner sanctum of her mind! The reactions of Max and Al to her were priceless!! Boy are they in for an education, I can see it now... very much looking forward to your next installment. (if Max thought Naraku in Tokyo was creepy, he's not seen anything yet!)

so far this was excelent! very well written entertaining and intelligent... quite a bit of humor as well. i am eagerly anticipating more of this unique story.

thank you,
ginny

I'm really liking the addition of Kikyo. I think that your portrayal of her passage of time are unique but make absolute sense (I kinda gota a creepy Lestat moldering under the house feeling too lol). Her thoughts about her own existance really hit home to how I personally saw her, and of course your fire-life comparison was wonderfully written and well thought out. I have to say that Al and Max's reactions to the "dead" body are great! The adjusting of robes when she stood made me giggle. I really enjoying your work.

BTW I have to agree with szaugglaughs about Max's very inventive exclamations. They work even better because they are his internal dialog and just paint a great picture of the kind of guy he is, for some reason I read it in my brother's voice LOL Things I think he would probably pop off with perhaps.

As usual, the only thing I didn't like about the chapter was the fact that it's ended! I thought the kikyou/max/kikyou viewpoint change was interesting, and i liked how we don't realize some of kikyou's influence until after they talk with her. It definitely gave a nice 'woah, wait a second, what the helll?' feeling to the chapter, in my opinion. Looking forward to more. Have a good new year,

Oh, I believe all my favorite line's are from Max

Holy FUCKING Republic of Ecuador
and
this is several flavours of creepy.

were two of the ones that really stuck in my head and gave me a nice chuckle.

*Attempts to recover from being blinded with a heaping helping of awesome.*

*Fails miserably.*

Ah well. I'm gonna go sleep off this blindness. After I bookmark your story.

Great job, and keep it up!

~Laz

Im still in chap. 8 ... well 9 now.. but...

Inuyasha is MAX huh.

I think i've figured this out.

i knew it was sessh. what an ass.