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for Winning is in my blood.

by Sorceressofthenight

person sessylover01
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it ...............please update it
person kagome2004
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story i can't wait until the next chappy is put up so please update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LCES
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is really awesome! I love it when Rin Kicks serious ass...but why did you state that the rating is PG? This is AdultFF afterall, it shoulg be R/NC-17!
Pls. update SOON!!!
person Kawaii-Kirara
schedule May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!
I would like to say great story again!
Also I would like to tell you that you should either find a beta or ask a reviewer to edit it. No offence but you grammer aint that good...
Any how please up-date SOON!

TTFN;
megan
person kagome2004
schedule May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kawaii-Kirara
schedule May 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay I would like to tell ya that this is a pretty great story that looks like it will have a REALLY good lemon/lime in it.
I hope/know rin WILL beat Kagura. IF SHE DOESN'T THAN SHE ISN'T REALL the BEST THAN IS SHE?
This story has a good plot...good characters...Fluffy beingarrogent...Rin being childish and mischevious...
ALL in all great story.
So please up-date SOON if possible...

TTFN;
megan
person kagome2004
schedule April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg..........this is awesome..........please do ur best to update asap.......i realize u are a very busy person so when ever u are able please update.....
person kouga's girl
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW THIS IS GOING TO BE A HOT STORY PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE
person kagome2004
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg if u don't continue i am gonna cry.......it is soo good please update more more more
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue with the storie