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for Where My Heart Lies

by Silverbeam

person oniguts
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so pissed off at Inuyasha but I also feel sad for him. He truly does not know how to love someone. When will he see that it was Kikyo who betrayed him and chosse to die. He always forgets that she was the one who pinned him to the tree. Kagome going off withou him made me so proud of her. I'm glad she decided to think of her well being for once instead of Inuyasha's. I hope she can prove that she really is a strong person on her own, should she ever have to fight her new enemy.
person Patty530
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. It's a wonderful story, and I'm really enjoying it. Please update again soon. Thanks

Patty
person Patty530
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi again. I just had to write and let you know that I understand your "fear" of writing a story that was not one long lemon. My story too is romance, the lemon in it is in the right context, not just sex for sex's sake. I was happily suprised when it was pretty well recieved. Just letting you know that I for one appreciate the romance aspect of your story. Keep up the good work.
person Patty530
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved every minute of it. Please update soon.
person Sieg
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well to say the truth it was good. but down to what matters is seeing in ur different chapters u statreed to change ur writeing style. dont know why that would be. second I dont think InuYasha could ever seem so weak. I like were u are going with Sango and Mirouki. But i dont know if i missed it or not was this after Naroku death. But over all i love the story keep it up.
person adeaneri
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story please update soon
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I half to say I love the direction you are going with the story. An also the face that after Kagomes life changes so dramatically, she dosn't just except it. I have read so many stories like that. (Point in case: Kagome turn into a demon, "Well I good with it." Smiles all around story moves one to something else.) I like seeing that is not easy for her to deal with, not that I like to see other people in misery or any thing but, things happen you cant control. WEll any way I look forward to reading more.
person angelevie (not logged in)
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It's very original. I hope you're able to update again soon!
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?