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Hello! I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your story! The way that you have captured all of the character's personalities throughout the story, shows your superiority in writing! It made me laugh and t make me cry, and I went through all many emotions andI was just wondering if your still going to update this story, or if there is another site that I could read the whole thing! I just finnished the last chapter, and I am excited to read more! Please tell me when your going to update... let it bee soon! Once again congrats on this fantastic fic!!

Jenn

Bless you. That chapter was awesome! Thanks for answering my queation of where in the world is Inuyasha. Thank you. Kikyo was a bitch for a fake jewel shard! Oh wow. Keep up the great work. I look forward to your updates.

Luv ya;

Patty

Thank you so much hun for the chapter update. I can't wait to see what the battle between koga and inuyasha will be about. Keep up the wonderful work of art your creating hun! =3

Yeah! A new chapter! Excellent as always...looking forward to more! :)

Large chapters are good, rushed endings are not.
That said, love this chapters tension, can't wait
to see this resovled.
Cliffhangers aren't bad either, they keep us reading!

*whimpers* I'm very new to your creative plot stroy here hun. I have to say that I was captivated and I read from chapter one to 18 all in one setting. I say this in truth and a criticer. I throughly enjoyed the read.

My only dislike of all of it is that the author is so crule as to harm the readers love of reading with a cliff hanger. XD Oh the agony of it all. X3 lol

Thank you for writing and sharing your art with every one here. As you are a humble wrighter I know you will continue to do a magnificent job and finish this plot and save this tomented reader as I am. ^^

I must say that I can tell your a lover of fine books and you've learned well from the authors you've read from. I've enjoyed how you bring a new twist to the story along with the details so that there isn't anything lacking.

You've done a fine job of slowly explaining everything and introducing new ideas and characters. I wonder however if Naraku will ever play a part since you have managed to bring in all the cast of Inuyash with the exception of Sessy and his own companions who are admist the main character listings as well. Though I trust you Authorship in deciding where things lead.

I do hope that you don't have a writers block any more and ideas flow freely. I thought I saw a A/N that you mentioned having already writen till chapter 20. My hope is that unlike other authors' stories I've read who make a hasty ending only to finish it for lack of knowing what else to do, you wont end up as such.

I have very high hopes for your writing in this senario. Please continue.

Thank you once more and I hope you know that you have a new fan who will be checking up on this story often in hopes for new chapters. =3

OH WOW! That chapter had a lot of "the hell" moments in it. Like: How the hell is Kagome going to get out of this?, Where the hell is Inuyasha?, What the hell is Master's problem? Loved it, but may I be so bold as to ask; Is there going to be a happy ending?

Luv;

Patty

Great chapter!
Love the strength Kagome is developing.
I think she's going to need it, I feel angst coming!
Well, more than lately. Bring it on!

Wonderful as always. Love this story. Keep up the good work. Update when you can.

Luv;
Patty

Excellent story - you are a wonderful writer. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!