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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story!
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say I do love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter, but I realy don't think Kagome and Sango would do that, THIS IS NOT A HATE MAIL PLEASE DON"T TAKE IT THE WRONG WAY! I'm just not used to seeing... I mean reading sangoXkagome it was good! so please don't email me and say something bad, I just speak...excuse me... write my mind to much I guess.
AND IT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER SO FAR, AND YOU WRITE THE BEST LEMONS I HAVE EVER SEEN...READ!
AND IT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER SO FAR, AND YOU WRITE THE BEST LEMONS I HAVE EVER SEEN...READ!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it. so much mystery and suspense that i am drawn into their world. please keep up the good job and please update soon, i cannot wait to see how the story feels out and to see if there is a sequal too it as well. good louck and good job.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great ficcy. I luv it! Update soon, onegai!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice update^^
so kagome isn't human anymore
kagome is now a gold like spirit embodying all that is pure and good in the world.
sesshomaru's daughter allerted him to the danger that he and kagome and the rest of the inu-tachi group were in. so they have taken the fight to naraku and away from the palace and where's shippou is he still at the palace helping to protect rin?
what will happen now that they are in the forest and the final battle with naraku coming soon?
update soon
ja ne
so kagome isn't human anymore
kagome is now a gold like spirit embodying all that is pure and good in the world.
sesshomaru's daughter allerted him to the danger that he and kagome and the rest of the inu-tachi group were in. so they have taken the fight to naraku and away from the palace and where's shippou is he still at the palace helping to protect rin?
what will happen now that they are in the forest and the final battle with naraku coming soon?
update soon
ja ne
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so now they are inside the house of the moon^^
i wish that someone would make a picture of sesshomaru's castle so that we can see what is really looks like^^ i bet it would beto die for*sighs*
so kagome and sesshomaru have made love again and they are going to meet kagome's family.
what will kagome's mom and grandpa say to all of this? will they have to go through a wedding to appease kagome's family?
how long will they stay in the future?
what is the name of there pup going to be?
when will the final battle between naraku and the gang begin?
now that kagome is sesshomaru's mate what will he do? who will be inuyasha's mate?
will inuyasha become a full demon in controll of his demon blood by using the shikon no tama or will he let kagome make a wish and purify the jewel and be rid of it for good?
great update
update soon onegai
ja ne
i wish that someone would make a picture of sesshomaru's castle so that we can see what is really looks like^^ i bet it would beto die for*sighs*
so kagome and sesshomaru have made love again and they are going to meet kagome's family.
what will kagome's mom and grandpa say to all of this? will they have to go through a wedding to appease kagome's family?
how long will they stay in the future?
what is the name of there pup going to be?
when will the final battle between naraku and the gang begin?
now that kagome is sesshomaru's mate what will he do? who will be inuyasha's mate?
will inuyasha become a full demon in controll of his demon blood by using the shikon no tama or will he let kagome make a wish and purify the jewel and be rid of it for good?
great update
update soon onegai
ja ne
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it so far but... it's all plot and no dialog...r u having a problem w/ writing dialog? it's a good story going t a good pase but it's all plot... keep up the good work... but if you could add in dialog that would make it better
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he is far out of charactor. i don't like it
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. Anxiously awaiting more :) Nicely written, too!!!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so good how you had them to come together slowly then faster as time went by and then you just let them kiss but slowly heated things up between them.
your lemon was perfection.
gentle and easy yet hot and passionate.
then the lagoon and having them make love in the cool water in an almost frenzied passion was exzilerating to say the least and sesshomaru picked the perfect place.
inuyasha has chosen kikyo over kagome. i feel so sorry for kagome because she is always pouring out her love toward inuyasha and then he lets her feel as if she has a special place in his heart yet everytime kikyo comes around all thoughts of kagome fly right out of his head. its like they were never there to begin with. he gets one wif of kikyo and inuyasha runs of to find her and do kami-sama knows what with her.
i'm glad that kagome finally has someone to love her and the same goes for sesshomaru and now they have someone to love them back.
onegai update soon onegai
see ya round
ja ne
your lemon was perfection.
gentle and easy yet hot and passionate.
then the lagoon and having them make love in the cool water in an almost frenzied passion was exzilerating to say the least and sesshomaru picked the perfect place.
inuyasha has chosen kikyo over kagome. i feel so sorry for kagome because she is always pouring out her love toward inuyasha and then he lets her feel as if she has a special place in his heart yet everytime kikyo comes around all thoughts of kagome fly right out of his head. its like they were never there to begin with. he gets one wif of kikyo and inuyasha runs of to find her and do kami-sama knows what with her.
i'm glad that kagome finally has someone to love her and the same goes for sesshomaru and now they have someone to love them back.
onegai update soon onegai
see ya round
ja ne