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for Last Day

by LilacDuchess

person lemon_ice
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well that was depressing. im interested to see what you do with this, and where you take it. will come back and read more with new chapter.
person l
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WoW! It's a promise... a really good promise. The chapter was short, but good enough to capture my atention. I'll be waiting the next one.

Big hugs from Brazil!

Lere
person K
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...I do hope you continue this story, I'd like to see where it goes (hopefully it will end on a happy note, but that's up to you...I've just been reading too many depressing fics lately lol) And I think it was very well written...definitely got my attention!
person J
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a powerful chapter for it being so short. I can't put my finger on the reason why though. Will you be expanding on this. You have the plumbing now all you need is to finish the foundation and start building from there. I'LL BE BACK!! I hope you do go on with the story. Great title as well. Bonsai!,Bonsa!!i,Bonsai!!! Oh please make them longer if possible,just a thought.