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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Mixed feelings... love it for the angst and it's so sad.... I need to know what's going to happen next!!!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving it!
Keep updating, maybe longer chapters?
I'd like to see further character development too! <333
-Jenna-
Keep updating, maybe longer chapters?
I'd like to see further character development too! <333
-Jenna-
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very promising.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg. this story is sooo awsome, but sooo sad. every word i read im always hoping that some how that every thing will turn out right, well ure the writer so dont fail me!!!!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I really like this story but once again I beg you….PLEASE!!! OH PLEASE!!! DON’T LET KAGOME DIE. I really like the way you describe the interactions between Kagome and Inuyasha. Keep up with the excellent job and update as soon as you can I’m looking forward to it.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great it caught my attention from the start. If its a one-shot then You did really great and if you countinue then I cant wait to read more.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting but.....PLEASE!!!! Don't let Kagome die!!!! I read the reviews and I share Jacque’s idea can’t you make Inuyasha finally mate Kagome in order to save her (as an act of love) so his demon blood that passed to her gives her the healing abilities and the health that he possess or something like that….I’ll leave it to your imagination I know you’ll do a great job you have already captivated my attention so please update as soon as you can and once again…Don’t let her die…
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh no! kagome can't die! Can't Inuyasha mate her to save her life or something like that? pleae, please update soon!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, usually I don't give criticizing reviews but I must say that this was a story that in my opinion simply wasn't worth posting, let alone writing at all. Where in the world did you come up with the idea anyway? Please respond via a review of one of my stories.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Captivating. In one word, that's what this is. Short, but wonderfully written. I'm guessing that this is just a one-shot, vague as it is. I love it! I'll check out your author page, but I have to read the latest from Possession first. (:D ^_^!!!) Please continue to write more fics. Sayonara!