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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting premise and one i haven't come across yet. your skill with language makes it all the better. i particularly enjoyed the part where he "glances at her with a frown, then kneels slightly before her. The message is clear: Get on." i like the tone of this piece (from Kagome's POV anyway): very matter-of-fact, yet uncertain and wistful at the same time. great writing! looking forward to more! ^.^
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! Continue, please, soon! No words to describe it... This story is sooo exciting, so full of emotions, so alive! I see them right before my eyes, with the same longing in their eyes...
You can't be so cruel as to make me wait to see what happens after the 3rd chapter! First the imotional trumoil in InuYasha, then the wonderfully written little lime-scene...
Your fic made me forget about everithing around me, so more!
Lynn
You can't be so cruel as to make me wait to see what happens after the 3rd chapter! First the imotional trumoil in InuYasha, then the wonderfully written little lime-scene...
Your fic made me forget about everithing around me, so more!
Lynn
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot! But update soon, please?
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please dont let Kagome die! Please! Ohy please update to. i love ur story.
~Dreamer
~Dreamer
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sad. I bet it's going to end with all of us crying our eyes out, eh? :/
Please make her feel the love from her Inu before she passes on. Kagome deserves it, imo.
<3 Love the writing, and the first person point of view.
Liz~ (Ps. Keep it coming.)
Please make her feel the love from her Inu before she passes on. Kagome deserves it, imo.
<3 Love the writing, and the first person point of view.
Liz~ (Ps. Keep it coming.)
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story seems so sad... interesting how things worked towards the end of the chapter ;p lol, please update soon! I want to see what comes of this new stuff that's happened!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don´t know what you are planning *looks suspicious* but I don´t care, this fic is just ....WOW! You know, it´s sad if she really has to die but hey, not every fic should have a happy ending. I love angsty and dark fics, it makes my skin crawl. Please update soon.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure I would be into a Kagome dying story but this is really good!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sigh... would that we could all go that way or atleast me anyway. I am really enjoying your story can't wait to read more. I hope you save kagome so they can be together.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW, i almost cried that was so bittersweet.